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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I think his fragility will wax and wane XD Right now he’s strong.
I have no idea if any of my characters would like to write, but maybe they’ll chip in 😀
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I am working on Ben’s voice because I’ve never written his POV, so please give me grace XD I’m testing this and that. The problem is, for he first book, he is literally nine years old in physical age and was way more gentle and fragile, so I’m trying to decide how much of that should carry forward ;P
Ben
“But I just came from…” Ben…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 5 months ago
Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yessss, awesome idea!! love it 😎 And it will always give our charries something to do if the RP slows for a little bit. XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@ummmyouguys
Yay! I’m glad people like my newspaper idea. I’m thinking of having the first club meeting in the afternoon at some point. Any ideas for the name of the newspaper?
I think Eddie and Ellie are going to math class, but that might change if no one else goes with them.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Poor Hans 🙁
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Aw, Kaine! That scene was really cool I want to read more
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whaley replied to the topic Ads? in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
I’m having a lot of problems seeing the updated page 😕 It just isn’t. Updated, I mean.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Kaine! Share yourself with others before you get pulled into drama so they can save you with love if you need it!! DUde!!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Good with me!
Btw, me, my brother and mum use noise-canceling earplugs too. They only cancel a layer of the noise so you can still hear what’s going on, but they do wonders for anxiety. I’ve also used – weirdly – rose tinted glasses. I only used them a couple times, but it’s the same concept – they cancel out a layer of visual.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @esther-c @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @jonas @rae @allthepeeps
I have an idea. :]
So I was looking through old stuff a bit ago and I saw that some characters had chosen journalism as an elective. Sooo what if we had a little school newspaper and a newspaper club?
There are plenty of crazy things that happen at this…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Morning classes are starting right now. No one has actually said what the subjects are yet, so I guess it can be anything you want. It also seems we kinda skipped breakfast.
We don’t use the old schedule anymore because it was too hard for everyone to follow, so you can have you characters do pretty much whatever you want. I personally n…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Ack, sorry! I saw your post a while ago, but, in typical Loopy fashion, I only responded in my head and forgot to actually respond. I’ve been praying, though! Hope things get better for you ❤️❤️
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I was going to include more of a description for the earplugs in the rp, but this is just easier. They aren’t just normal foam earplugs. Instead, they’re a lot like bluetooth earbuds, except their main purpose is to block sound, not play music. Ellie can change the settings by pressing the button on the right one. People might possibly mistake the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@people Hi. I’m back for now
Ellie
“Ed, wake up! We’re going to be late!”
A bagel flew through the air, bounced off of Eddie’s forehead, and landed on the pillow beside her. She rubbed her eyes with the back of her hand and rolled over.
“I grabbed you some breakfast.” Ellie balanced on one foot next to her sister’s bed, tugging on a red, ve…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @rae @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Alright, gonna RP for two more charries real quick. Feel free to have your character interact with them or totally ignore them. 😛
Hallie
“Are you sure my hair looks okay?”
“Hallie, it looks fine.”
She turned away from the window and narrowed her eyes at her brother.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Everton
“Woah, what the— Oh…” Ev pushed a hand through his hair and looked at the boy he had run into. “Tony right?”
Sorry it’s so short. I wasn’t sure if Tony would just give a simple answer or not. 🙃
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
He could draw the whole yearbook XP
Ben
Ben pointed at the drawing. “That’s me, isn’t it? You squinted at me real weird, and that’s what told me.”
The boy gave him a long, depressed stare. Then nodded.
“Score!” Ben bounced his knees – not just as a celebration, but because he was already itching to transform into one of those wolves. But…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
The classes are way looser now, so you can use the teacher whenever.
Yeah, I figured Chase shifted like that. I just thought it would be funny to have a character who realistically shifts, and always has to deal with putting his clothes back on XD We’ll see how he manages! And yeah, Chase could write, if you feel like that’s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ben
It felt so free to be a single child!
Ben tossed his underwear out the window and scrambled out, along the frame and up the brick wall.
His tail twitched, so the sun rays flashed off and on in his eyes. Warmth trickled into his tiny rodent body – first through the skin folds connected to his armpits, then seeping into…[Read more]
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