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Loopy replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Yayyy more Tauren and Lesli content! I really enjoyed reading that. Your dialogue is really realistic and fun and I loved that description at the beginning <3
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
^ @whalekeeper @keilah-h @rae @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @anyone
It’s not much, but it’s a lot for me right now
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Finally doing some actual writing outside of role plays lol
This is the first time Lois and Felicity meet. I’m still figuring out backstories, plot line, and world building. Also, I’m not done, I’m just impatient to show people. I’ll post more once I finish. :]
Felicity’s shoes rubbed and pinched at her ankles as she walked down the empty…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Hey Rae, I read the first two chapters! 😛 I don’t think they’re a waste at all. I just put together a little overview of my initial reactions.
Thoughts on Nahim’s personality:
The strongest Nahim trait here is depression. Solid, unwavering depression. XD He thinks about his family constantly, and not much else. Personality-wise, he strikes me…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I’ll tell you if I think of anything else tho
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Loopy replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper Can’t think of any nicknames other than coppers or boys in blue, but this has somehow sent me down a research rabbit hole on different types of slang XD I think I’m going to make a new character who uses Cockney rhyming slang
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Loopy replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@people Sorry, I’m moving this week so I probably won’t be as active
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Esther replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
(Actually, maybe it was in the US….)
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Esther replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Irl, I’m pretty sure gangsters used to call the police the Fuzz. At least in the UK… probably not here in America, lol.
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@everyone
Ooh, I really like HighScribe’s idea!! If y’all don’t mind going back and ranking the answers, then I think we should totally do that.
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whaley replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theducktator @theshadow @rae @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @theloonyone @ava-blue @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 (I probably butchered these tags without a reference)
Heya people, bringing back this thread. 🙃
Can anyone think of times in fiction/whatever where police officers, government…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
I only have one meme, but I still would love to share it
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Loopy replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Ok well now I wish I’d voted arthurian or steampunk. I’m not exactly a very decisive human
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Dante
“The dance? Is that all you people think about?” Dante scratched the back of his neck, unsure. “I wasn’t going to before, but now. ..” He shrugged. “We’ll see. Why? You going?”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
In short, I’m really bad at character cloaking in rps.
We all experiment on here, lol. And it’s hard to tell from the writer’s perspective whether or not you’re revealing enough.
I never know if what I reveal is obvious or too vague to be interesting. My characters keep their backstories on a back-burner. But that’s just my own personal p…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Hey Rae! I forgot to tell you, but I have read all your chapters. Not necessarily the worldbuilding sections on the side, just because I didn’t have the time 😅 If you need to ask me any questions about my reactions as a reader, I’m game. Like if you want my emotional opinion on a section, or whatever.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
There’s always profile pics. *shrugs* 🫲😕🫱
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whaley replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 4 months ago
I’m baaaack. And I’m going to say this again – you can have some songs with lyrics, I decided it’s okay! 😂👌 If anyone sees this.
This dude/dudette has a strong sense of duty, willing to sacrifice themselves for the greater good. They may be quiet or private, but are good-natured around others. They have a positive arc, tryin…[Read more]
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