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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Rikerrrrr!! Yes yes yes yessss ✨
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Waitttt, that’s not a bad idea!! I’m definitely going to consider that. My original idea that I’m working with now is that Hallie ends up joining/hanging out with a group of girls who are “popular”ish. They give her advice and pretend to be nice to her. In fact she ends up spending a lot of time with them since all her other…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Thanks!! The foreshadowing and pacing in this book is definitely stretching me and it’s been a learning curve, but I’m slowly figuring it out. (I think… XD)
Aww, thanks!!
Um… practice? I don’t know, but honestly it’s just practice. XD Now I will confess, I used to throw tons of action tags on dialogue an…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years, 4 months ago
I love your signature 🤣
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@theducktator @koshka @keilah-h
Brace adjustments XDXD They put in these rubber bands two days ago and now I can’t chew.
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whaley replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Okay, keep in mind most of these are optional! I’ll make sure to note which ones are grammatically necessary, and you can assume anything else is just to give the reader’s eye a rest where it is the most logical.
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CHAPTER 1-LAXAN INVASION
!0,015 GA. The city of Laxan on the planet Laxor…
Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava spewed from t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
All your replies are noted ;P
I saw somewhere that you have trouble with paragraph breaks. I love sequencing sentences, especially dialogue sentences, so I’ll give you some suggestions here in just a sec.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Sorry, but I have to let out my feelings somewhere
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
You have never known true pain and dedication, unless you have been forced to eat bacon with your front teeth only.
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whaley replied to the topic Overwhelming Characters in the forum Characters 2 years, 4 months ago
Cool! Good to know; thank you for clarifying ;P
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whaley replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years, 4 months ago
*Happily watching*
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whaley replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
Ok, so this is a wonderful point of discussion to go to when it comes to God’s nature. What is reality itself, and what is existence.
Alriiiight, let’s do this *cracks knuckles*
If there are multiple necessary beings, then their identity would be partially defined by their relationship with the other, which means they are d…
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I remember holding day-old kittens… So cute 😇
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Cuuuute XD
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whaley replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
Darn that was long, my apologies *Skedaddles into my hidey hole*
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whaley replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
Hey dude. I just had a random thought, and I wondered how it would be interpreted by you.
From my point of view, I don’t disagree with you that there are “gods” or spirits that can be of many different types, but generalize themselves as the same thing. I can understand the referring of the Three as One to be a similar…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Okay XD Disclaimer. It has been 5+ years since I wrote this girl. She is one of my oldest characters, and I mean so old, she was in my very first official story… when I was six. 🙃❤️
I’ll adjust her a bit, but of course she’ll have similar vibes. I’m proud of what she represents and the memories of my childhood storyteller persona…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @freed_and_redeemed @theducktator @iknowimmisssingsomeoneee @anyoneinterested
Here’s a scene I wrote earlier this afternoon from Worth All the World. Apparently Easton was in a mood (which I feel like is a little out of character, but right now, idc because it actually might work XD). Warning: unedited 😬
(ok I’ll stop tal…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 4 months ago
Excited! 👀😏😁
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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