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Loopy replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 2 months ago
This might not be very accurate, but here:
A country girl makes it her life’s purpose to rid a city of its helpful police robots.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Felicity
After seeing Soldier come back with the dead body of a dragon and drop it in front of them like a cat would with a mouse carcass, Felicity decided she was grateful to be these people’s ally.
They arrived at the cave and settled down. Someone had suggested starting a fire, but they had little luck finding any wood that wasn’t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper I wanna boop the long snoot
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Here is my feeble attempt at keeping this thing going
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Felicity
“Alright, well, mission accomplished. You made it to your class. About time I head to mine.”
Fel turned to leave, giving Chase a playful but gentle punch to the shoulder. She winked.
“It was fun hanging out.”
Then she walked out of the field and back to the school buildin…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Me when I lose my spot while archiving this rp and have to scroll back 200+ pages to find it again:

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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Boom, finally caught up
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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whaley started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 2 months ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot

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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Melissa
“I goeth out of this tunnel… -eth” Mel wiggled the rest of the way out and retrieved her stick, which she had left by the burrow’s entrance. She looked the girl who had just appeared up and down with her flashlight.
“You talk funny. But I like your cape. I’m Mel.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m having more fun writing this imp guy than my actual characters lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
MelissaAs Mel followed the rabbit, it began picking up speed, and she found herself jogging to keep up with it.
There was something up ahead. A thin line across the path, reflecting silver in her flashlight beam. Mel slowed slightly, hopped over it, and continued running. Ahead, the rabbit turned suddenly right, and disappeared…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Should the rabbit lead Mel and Barnes back to your characters, or not yet?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.
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