Rylie Goodwin

@hybridlore

(and a month later…😬)

Thank you!

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Jayson

The girl looked almost angry. Frustrated? Uncomfortable. Destressed. I glanced around at the dim hallway and cobwebby stonework. Was she claustrophobic perhaps?

Marek paused mid step as if he’d forgotten something, or forgotten to forget. “So…”He looked at us with a wonky blank smile.  “do any of you guys ha…[Read more]

I absolutely understand! In some ways fiction and KP are a get away for me, which can be a good thing or a really bad thing. God bless!

@godlyfantasy12

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! You’re baaaaack!

*regains dignity*

*curtsies*

Which I suppose posting this says I’m back too…. although that may be dangerous to assume.

Anyway, You Have A Kitty Now? I love kitties. Our two cats think they are royalty of the highest blood and therefore cannot be held accountable for…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

EEEEEEEEE!!!!! You’re back!!!!!

You got a cat?! I love cats (obviously)!

I’ve been off for the past month, but I should be back for a while again.

Vulka and Zlati send greetings, as well as-

*Suspenseful violin interlude*

The Vilder.

*Hands you a bowl of raspberries*

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Sorry y’all, I was out the the Kingdom for a awhile.

Smiley, I think it’s your turn. Would you like to go? =)

@mineralizedwritings I see I see, cool cool ^^

@mineralizedwritings Aw thanks haha! Are you planning on reading it?

@overcomer

My style…I’m not really sure where it has come from, except that almost all the poetry I’ve read was written before the 1940’s.

The meter here is roughly 7-8 syllables with a pause of cadence in the middle of each line. The rhythm is One and TWO and Three and FOUR. I hope that helps and isn’t more confusing.

Ah, slant rhyme. I have…[Read more]

@livingwoodchronicles

Hmm…true, true.

How do I sign up?

Random interjection of verse!!!!

Just a girl with big dreams and a heart full of Going,

Hands for the harvest and tales for the Sowing,

Awaiting her story but even then knowing-

That fields laid to follow are still part of Growing.

@livingwoodchronicles

This looks amazingly! I would love to join in, although…

My writing isn’t the very great yet, (but my sister who is reading over my shoulder just said it wasn’t bad either). I do write clean, the prose is just bumpy. I’d love to try though.

@rae

I’m not sure what to call my style, besides being metered and rhymed. I don’t know a whole lot about poetry, besides a few basic rules.

Hmm, thanks for ideas and feedback!

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you! It’s one of my best so far.

Hey y’all, I and my sister will be on off and on for the next couple of days (especially tomorrow), so that could potentially add 2 to your numbers.

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Jayson

This was awkward.

“Jayson, Rafael, which would you two prefer?” the older man turned to Raffe with a gentle smile. I glanced at my Commando In Arms (I’ll explain later, it has to do with cereal boxes).

“Well,” Raffe paused as if tasting his thoughts before serving them for general consumption. “I think you’r…[Read more]

@overcomer

Here’s the poem I’ve been struggling with. The first and fourth stanzas irritate me the most.

I also have no idea who to tag for this anymore (the last thing I submitted for critiques was some time ago) but feel free to tag anyone.

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Okay y’all, I just got off on Christmas break, so I should be able to RP consistently for a week or so, if y’all are up to getting the Leon, Elenore, Isaiah, ect. group up again.