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Active 3 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Croissants 🥐
Onnendel loves them. They remind him of a breakfast food he ate often as a kid. He will get very sad if one goes stale and mutter nostalgic nonsense as he toasts it.
Dwogin doesn’t really like them. They’re too fluffy and don’t have enough substance to them. Flattens his to show how much of it is just air bubbles. Ridicules…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 4 months, 2 weeks ago
He is indeed! That’s lovely.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@power Yes! And when they “win their spurs” they can say it’s for “Brilliant KeePers”.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's one thing you know now that you wish you knew when you started writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Um… This is a good question. I relate to all your answers, lol.
I guess that I could embrace childlike wonder without losing depth to my story, that I needed mentorship but didn’t have to accept every idea, and that daydreaming is not the same as writing.
Wait. Not sure I actually know that last one yet. XD But really, that there are many ways…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
We have waited so long for a welcome post to comment on….. A Bumbling Henchman to ask random questions…. We apologize if the welcome committee is a little over-zealous, but we’re so excited you’re here!
So, so excited.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I just messaged the newbie.
*salutes*
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@stacey-weyenberg Hey there! Welcome to KP.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
COOL. Is it vintage or reconstructioned/repatterned? What type of wool?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks! It was really fun to experiment with.
They look great! That’s an impressive project. I hope it turns out well!
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Koshka replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 2 weeks ago
WhAt??? Wacky theology? Really??? *Utter sarcasm*
Ugh yes. The Angel stuff is just…weird. and then there’s Drew’s senses things and the red light expirement…*shakes head in mild derision*
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Koshka replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Wow. Yup, Green Beret. He did die in the Middle East, but I don’t think it specified a place or operation.
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Koshka replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 2 weeks ago
That sounds a lot like Cloak of Light.
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Koshka replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 2 weeks ago
XD Well good! Glad it was helpful. Don’t worry too much over the whole “Gracious but this draft needs so much work” problem. You’ve already put in a ton of work and learned so much just to get to this point in the drafting process. You can do this! It’s worth it. (
plus, hey, we’re all in this thing too…writer’s are crazy)Just goes to…
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Koshka replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 2 weeks ago
And I would like to throw in something that might be totally unrelated to what you’re dealing with, but it was a bit of a shock to me and had me seriously rethinking how I address certain topics in my books.
(Warning. Mentions of suicide.)
In my recent Psychology class we discussed aproaches to suicide awareness, and the results were mildly…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 2 weeks ago
This is a very good question.
But I suppose it comes down to what the reader sees is going on and what the character sees–and those don’t have to be the same. In this case, shouldn’t be.
I’m in the middle of rereading Screwtape Letters. One of the letters tells about how that sin has pleasure attached, and how that pleasure actually…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Yay! okay, y’all. Expect to see another instalment by the end of the week.
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
welp, let’s see it this one goes through…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I’ll just casually pretend that I didn’t read that.Pure genius! 😉
I probably should go through and add things to differentiate/clarify. I most likely will, idk.
The first two chapters of this book are really difficult, but I promise things become a bit easier later.
Got it! And I get the struggle. You don’t want to info dump or…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @ducktator
Oof… Celerant just put Viktor in an awkward place. His deep sense of justice won’t like that. XDViktor
He was going to have a headache. Not from a strike or anything, but from this whole unruly ordeal.
“Great job!” He passed a ball to a lanky kid with the aim of a sniper. The kid nodded and pegged another…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Emrys set Blaine down and tilted Bennett’s face upward, “Of course I’m coming home today! I have a couple days off and ten little beans waiting to party with me.”
Bennett’s face lit up, “Are we gonna watch a movie?”
Awwwww
Mam…” Blaine stared adoringly. Without hesitation, he knew what he must draw. First a circle, because all good things start…
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