@lrose5
Active 2 years, 2 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Sounds good to me! We will be having dinner soon, however, and church soon after that. (There’s a missionary friend of our family coming ; I’m sooo excited!)
So, I’ll go ahead and do a little one of Winton preparing for it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
That’s a good part too. I did say it was ONE of my favorites…
I just like blowing stuff up. *Face palm* XD
But the one to one conversations are priceless!
Also, in that last one, I love the mildly creepy way you described Felix. *Shudder* 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Ah, perfect! That was such a pleasure to read. I love these characters!
And their dynamic and descriptions are superb! I love seeing them interact.
The whole thing was really good, especially for a first draft. One of my favorites is the opening, but I have a soft spot for guerrilla warfare and resistance groups (should I have…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
With November? No! At least, not my guys. They’re fair enough to not expect everyone else to be completely open when they aren’t.
They will be curious, however, and curiosity mean they will try to find out more.
By the way, is Corvina still in the shadows?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I KNOOWWW! 😭 but poor November is in serious trouble!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
By the way, Reúven’s “usual” is a quick, anonymous strike to a nervous shut down point. I thought it might give a decent way to clear off Hitchens for the moment, especially since I can’t see either of my boys, or any of the others in this group, standing still right then. XD
Also, I’m guessing…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 …definitely. @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Viktor
The slug, Hitchens had his blade to Arabella’s throat. Viktor exchanged a wide-eyed glance with Reúven and unlooped his rod from his belt. Reúven had drawn his knife, and was quickly moving behind the man, his eyes glittering.
Then it happened. A wave of terror ripped t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
I’m on. I’m actually stuck home sick right now, so I’ll be off and on.
I am considering Eira coming, not because she’s been technically abused, but to get some really sad ideas out of her head. For instance, she’s been raised to be agnostic.
Eira
A slight smile flickers across my face when s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Eira
I stare at her for a long moment untill the mild shock wears off and my eyes drop back to the half eaten jello cup. “Astronomy.”
Stars. My hand itches to find the book in my backpack and loose myself among them, but I swallow the last glob and ask what a brother’s like. If she’s talking I don’t have to, and besides; I sort…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
They better let Paxton go, even if it’s like “well, at least it’ll keep him out of our way” although it is usually them in his way but……..
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yay! I’m totally fine with it.
Eira
I force the last of my broccoli down with a gulp of water. The bread isn’t that bad, infact I almost enjoy the grainy texture of the garlic topping.
“Hi.” My drink almost topples at the sudden approach. The girl smiles at me and waves. “I’m Aadelheide.”
She sets her lunch sack on the table…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Who should I tag for Eira? Just everyone?
Eira
I slide into the end of the lunch line careful not to attract any attention, even though Aramis appeared to already be occupied. Still, I hadn’t gained notice yet today and certainly didn’t want to start now.
Most of the kids around me pretend I don’t exist, probably because they don’t know what to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Thank you for the happy chapters though!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ahhhhhh!!!!! She’s hilariously awesome.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yes, I was thinking he was taking a few extra classes while doing training at the same nearby military base as Rúven is taking his.
Plus he’s here looking for a possible tie to his lost sister.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
This is going to be awesome!
Reúven & Friends
The hall outside the cafeteria reeked of ravioli and broccoli. Reúven wrinkled his nose and considered his choices.
An MRE, or school lunch?
He glanced in the trashcan as they stepped inside.
MRE.
He would rather trust the d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh my, the monopoly…*gasping with laughter*
I like them both, but that last one had me laughing so hard, I just have to love it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Almarrin
He smiled at the boy and lightly squeezed his shoulder. If only the brat would come for him from now on instead of messing with the youths and children. “My name’s Almarrin Woden. Welcome to my table. Have you two eaten?”
“No, but it’s alright.” The lass smiled as prettily as an E…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter @keilah-h @wilder-w
Winton Aetheling
Some people, when they see the evil of the world, hide their eyes and try to forget. Some grow hard and insensitive. But some see it, and without loving the wickedness, reach for those entangled. Those some love even when it hurts, reach even past hope, and don’t give up…[Read more]
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