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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Btw, have you seen the new chapter Elishavet posted in Portals?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Leo
The bathroom door squeaked as he pushed through. The faint smell of bleach and glass cleaner rushed to meet him. He held it open for Rory, noting with concern the pinched look in the boy’s face.
“This’ll only take a minute.”
Someone had thought to block the damaged stall with a trashcan. Helpful.
The handrail was hanging…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I know!! XD
Leo
Their footsteps echoed faintly along the school hallway. A teacher’s lecture sounded muffled behind closed doors.
“Where now?”
Leo looked over at the kid. He was limping. They really needed to get him checked out by a doctor…but Rory hadn’t seemed thrilled with that sugestion. At least Leo could pick up a k…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
XD
Oh my word.
Also, I enjoyed writing those Leo-bests-the-creeps scenes so much. It was awesome.
Leo
“Of course not. Faith in something just because someone else said so is about as solid as water. You might build a house from ice, but when Summer comes round it’s all melt away. If you want what you build to last, you’re…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy Religions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Tips? I’m not sure. I’m not super experiened in this. I’ll share my thoughts though.
The books that I liked their fictional reresentation of God are Narnia, Wingfeather, Wilderking, Mistmantle, and Kingdom’s Dawn/Knights of Aerethtrae. Some books that I didn’t like the “Christian”/religious rep inlcude Dragon Slippers andWhen…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @raxforge
Aww, my pastor’s daughter has an Aussie she rescued. She’s hilarious.
Sypher
He gave a playful bow to the wriggling creature in Ellie’s arms.
“Honored to make your aquantance, you Blackjack.” He straightened, tightening his sash and grinning. “He’s a handful. Looks like great fun though, having an Animal.”
The…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Leo
The elevator closed after them. Leo punched in the number 2 button and leaned back against the wall. With a whirl and a rattle they began to decend.
He glanced over at the kid. Rory was quiet–quieter than usual at least–after the conversation over tile. Leo noted the way he subconsciously gripped the side rail. Not very…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Ah! That makes sense. It’s a fascinating occupation. 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Ah, yes, that gives me several ideas, especially for the plot structure. Thank you for sharing!
I think I’m going to like all your charries. Beric’s board is lovely. Are they all blacksmiths?
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
And for y’all’s information, we have just reached over 12,000 words on the completed chapters doc.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterestedinRangers
It’s been a week. Did the two sometimes-forgetful Scribblers write another scene?
YES!
In Which the Band Gets Interrogated, and Storytime Makes a Comeback
Chapter 8
The corridor beyond was just like I had imagined it. Stone walls curved around us in a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@theducktator Glitter? XD that’s definitely how my dad would feel about the stuff.
@whalekeeper @loopylin @raxforge
Sypher
A field day? So…a day out in a grassy field. Or, not quite a field. The strange faced lady swung herself up in a tree as the earlier chaos ensued.
Ellie appeared beside him, and set her backpack down, one hand…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Yay! It worked. I realize now that the last bit was a touch scrambled. It should read like this:
The little boy Laiba was carrying struggled to get down. The moment his feet touched the tent floor he trundled off to join his siblings. Laiba smiled faintly.
“They are precious.” Alyona whispered politely, her heart twisting inside her. The girl…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
And a bit from Book 2!
“Welcome, husband.” The woman by the fire stood up. She was beautiful in her own way. Her eyes were a honey gold and glowed with a quiet excitement. The hair that she brushed back under her hood was dark as night. Alyona thought she might be a few years younger than Clehan. A small child was perched on her hip, his head res…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I am too suspicious about this connection to try to open another thread to do this… I think this is the right spot though.
@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @loopylin @anyone-who-wants
I have picked up writing in my WIP a bit more the past week, although it’s a bit out of chronological order. I just…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I made it! I’ve been trying to get on all day. Had it “opening” during work which was slow today.
But I have made it. *gasp for breath*
Koshka and I are working on homework, so we’ll be on and off… As much as Wyoh lets us in.
*glares at Wyoh*
Be nice! I wrote some scenes I want to share for critiques.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin
Oh goodness. XD
Sypher
The white faced woman stood at the front of the room. Syph slowly followed suit. Guppies, but those shadowed eyes were unnerving. He dropped the pearly water twist he’d been fidgeting with. It dissolved into air before it reached the ground.
Outside? Back into the sunshine and fresh air?…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*blink*
That was weird.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Flipping through the pages of this RP feeling rather like a spy as I try to hunt down my errant water sprite.
Not sure where he is rn.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Flipping through the pages of this RP feeling rather like a spy as I try to hunt down my errant water sprite. As if I don’t have an essay to write, ect.
Not sure where he is rn. Not sure where I left him.
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