@lrose5
Active 3 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
It’s fine! =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
I think it ate my tag.
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
I’ll have to do something like that… Soon.
How long have you been writing verse? My first ‘poems’ were practically sets of rhyme and meter with nothing much in the way of meaning. They were TERRIBLE!
Maybe that’s why I don’t like jellybeans.
Ooo, that’s hard. I’ve read so many good books. Maybe Myles and Gascone from Men Of Iron, Shasta,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h Aww, thank you! 🙂
Yeah, that kind of tongue-in-cheek wit is a bit prevalent in my writing. It’s not always a good thing…but I like it here. 😉
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 10 months ago
@annabelle
Hello there! I am Koshka, or at least that’s what I’m called around here. *gasp* Another Homeschooler… Hi!
You are publishing your first book? Awesome! I have yet to complete ONE of my many story idea, so not even close to where you are.I love poetry too, both writing and reading. My verse is rarely as direct as your Reading Poem.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 10 months ago
Is this better?
Here voices scream, ‘You’re still in pain,
This Dream and Hope are all in vain.’
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 10 months ago
Thank you! My verse is just starting to feel right, if that makes any sense.
The voices are saying that. Would removing the punctuation clear that up, or do I need to do something else?
(YES, the author appreciates it very much!)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 10 months ago
Welcome! 😉
*Note* I was wondering the same thing as @anatra23. Is it a dialogue?
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Lin replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 10 months ago
@avacoulter I literally just watched Markiplier try aerial silks, haha. It looks really cool!
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 10 months ago
@annabelle I have a younger sister, but that’s it, haha.
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 10 months ago
Are there any things you would change?
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile
Thank you! I loved writing it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 10 months ago
This is a fascinating poem. I especially love the last stanza, and the others are very good too. The imagery is particularly intriguing to me, as well as the change in meter at the end of each stanza.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 10 months ago
The author of this poem, who at the moment is doing the dishes and thus can’t access her phone, has requested I tag a few people to look over this. (I think that’s what she said.)
@anatra23 @power @abigail-m @anybody-else @yes-you-reading-this-right-now 😉
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Koshka started the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 10 months ago
Song/poem I just wrote. I don’t know if it’s any good. It would be sung be a captive.
Sing of Tomorrow
My yesterday was full of fears,
Today is always drenched in tears,
But I’m still singing-
I want to see Tomorrow again,
Show me Tomorrow again.
The years have slowly ground away,
And night was gaining day by day,
Yet I kept…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
You’re welcome! I can’t think of anything, but then, there might be something like that one of the mythology enthusiats here would know about. I don’t know much about fantasy in that direction myself.
Actually, Artham did inspire a character/creature in one of my books: essentially, the eagle I described above.
I was facsinated with…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 10 months ago
@annabelle Yess, plus with pen and paper it’s more transportable.
Wow, that’s a lot of siblings! Are you the oldest or…?
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 10 months ago
@annabelle Oh, nice! I was homeschooled as well. And I still hand write a lot of things, for some reason.
It sounds like you guys make a good team! How many siblings do you have?
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Lin replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 10 months ago
@avacoulter Sounds like maybe you’re up for a novellette or novella, haha.
What other things are you into?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 10 months ago
Wow, we do share quite a few favorite authors!
You like researching/designing fashion? Approximately, what eras hold the most interest for you, and what do you enjoy about it?
Personally, I enjoy learning about and recreating old clothing because I love history, and anyway, it’s great for world building! (Plus, hey, dressing up is fun.) 😉
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