@lrose5
Active 3 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
So this is weird and random, but could I introduce another character? Zlatan and Vulkasin will most likely be disappearing soon (I’m not sure when, but I’m ready for a change), and I’d like it to be seamless. He’s a fox, and I think I’d leave him that way.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Of course!
Alyona Mynclais, second MC/central side character
3 cubits in height. XD okay, maybe that’s a little bookish. I’m still world building y’all!
So, 5′ in height, with dark hair and eyes, she is twelve at this point in the books.
I haven’t taken her personality test yet, but this is what I know. She is loyal to her…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
Wowsers. =)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Yes, the castle has basically come under the government of my villain, who may show up again soon. So, in a way, my characters “know” more about this castle than anyone else… except they don’t, because I didn’t make this castle. 😉
Alyona and Viktor could and probably would show you to the kitchens. They know their way around here…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
Those look awesome (though I have absolutely no idea what the Council of Bust is)!
I found a song for Mitchel! And I think I’m changing his name to Mikkel, and his sister may not be the other MC of this book, but that book is the last in the series, so I still have plenty of time to figure them out. XD
Anyway, his song…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Bwahahaha! I love how all these characters interact. XD
Alyona
A gasp leapt into her mouth. This person wanted to help them?
A mere glance showed her to be between Viktor and herself in height, but this wasn’t what struck Alyona.
The girl was dressed in rags. Brightly dyed rags, but still not very adequate.…[Read more]
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Calling all bloggers! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 3 months ago
Oh, that’s you! Cool! (I’m a bit slow to connect accounts across platforms sometimes, lol.)
If something else is working better and you’re enjoying it more, there’s nothing wrong with focusing on that for a while. A blog, like any other platform, is meant to serve you. If it’s not doing that yet, maybe it’s not a good fit, maybe it’s not a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
I’m popping back on here to clarify; I was thinking of later in these characters lives. Like, they become close friends during the series, and sometime later, when Paxton is older, the marriage idea enters the horizon.
And I’m someone who has avoided any sort of romance in my book’s, as I wanted Christian literature without twitter-pated…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Hi!! I’m back, but warning now, I may have to disappear again in the somewhat near future.
Zlatan and Vulkasin
The corridor was dark, the small oil lamp bright in his hand. Shadows swayed to it’s flickering flame.
Which way led to the brother and sister?
“Nyx,” Zlatan turned to the little fox. He…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Viktor
They gained the out leading corridor, passing side halls with rapid succession. Soon there would be a narrow window and they’d have some light.
How he hungered for that light!
Their pursuer was still there, but much less frightening. He nearly scolded himself for bolting in the first place. Nearly.
As…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Okay, so it deleted my response, I don’t know if the original will pop up later as well, but I’m going ahead and posting this, since I thankfully have the story part saved.
I also don’t know how well this one worked out, but here goes!
By the way, Milla sounds nice! Unfortunately, she has a talent for spooking…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
So, I’m not sure how well this one worked out, but here goes!
Milla sounds nice! Unfortunately, she seems to have a talent for spooking my charries. XD It’s not her fault though.
Viktor
They were close, so close. He could feel the draft from the approaching door.
Thankfully Alya hadn’t been injured in her…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic You have the ability to read a book for the first time again… in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 3 months ago
Hmm, that’s a hard question. There are so many books I’d like to momentarily forget the plot twists of so I could enjoy the surprise again. Especially when listening to these books with other people and trying not to spoil anything.
Just off the top of my head, though, I’d say the Wingfeather Saga, The Green Ember series, or the…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic You have the ability to read a book for the first time again… in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 3 months ago
@kathleenramm The 20th Century Boys manga series. I want to experience the suspense and emotions of the whole series, trying to find out who Friend is…
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Katherine replied to the topic Greetings; I am a Jesus-follower in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Ah, yes I am an editor for Elfwing’s book! I believe I know who you are!😀Â
What a small world we live in. XDDOooh, I love “The God Who Stays”!!!!!!!! 😀 That’s such a great song!!!!! Matthew West’s song, “Mended” is another one of his that I love! Music without words is really pretty!!! And Irish-type music is awesome!!!!! I’ve never…[Read more]
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Kathleen started the topic You have the ability to read a book for the first time again… in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 4 months ago
You have the ability to read one book for the first time again, which book would you choose? Why?
Okay, this is such a cop-out, but I genuinely don’t have an answer to this.Maybe it’s because I haven’t read enough books, or maybe it’s because I really like rereading books so reading them for the first time again hasn’t really been something I’ve…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Awesome!
Well, yeah, I tend to be around quite a few people with opposing worldviews. Though it usually ends up with far more conflict and split paths than heroic character arcs that inspire the people around them, haha.
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Kathleen replied to the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
I think it’s great that you have a character that displays what the end of the MC’s character arc will be, so maybe for your students it could be the opposite of that. They could be the resistance to the MC’s character arc.
They would demonstrate different world views on the theme of “changing the world for the better”, Which would…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
From what I see from age gaps, I think it’s more about the stage person is at in life rather than the actual number of years. (Though, the number of years is important too)
Like a fifteen-year-old dating, a twenty-year-old is a lot different than a twenty-year-old dating a twenty-five-year-old.
One is perfectly fine, the other…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 4 months ago
@madelyn
I really like allegories that are subtle. Where the story alone stands strong by itself and the allegory just adds a layer of depth and core themes.Mainly because, if the story I am reading is very obviously an allegory, all I can think about is the story its an allegory of instead of the story itself, which gets in the way of me…[Read more]
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