@lrose5
Active 3 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Thank you! Quickly puts on glasses.
Eagles are wonderful creatures. Viktor’s bird is named Esen, which I think means “heaven’s wind” or “wisdom” in Eishlagair. (I’m not sure on the translation.)
That’s a good idea. That way, we can come back and do this again, but can change anything we need to.
So, for my…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@queen_of_alvastia Yes, I still draw characters! Just a heads-up, I’ll be starting school this Monday so if you’d like me to draw a charrie (or more, if you like) now’s the perfect time! 👈😎👈
And I wish you luck with your writing dilemma 🧐 I also tend to write all these menial little scenes and details rather than figuring out the big problems…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
I do! 😎
Yeah, except they do need him to for e them to action…
But did I ever mention that later in the book, Viktor gets a GIANT eagle? (10 foot wingspan. Slate, ivory, and gold, a rare Mountain Guardian Eagle that actually belonged to the king.)
That eagle doesn’t like Ocran anymore than I do. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Ooo, interesting idea. (I do have a few characters I’d like to introduce soon if y’all don’t mind.)
And here’s my charies on here:
Zlatan, son of (Sotnik) Vratislav. Wolf in the book, but a human on this RP for convenience. A Desanik in the army. Age 17, straight black hair cut at the jawline, golden eyes. 5’9″, not going to get much…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 4 years ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
That’s right! Let’s not have any deaths, as of yet.
*Has secretly joined the #protectionsquad* 😉
(Although, If it weren’t for the fact that I need him for the story, I’d totally let them kill Ocran. But it’s all right, I have a very special fate reserved for him.)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
That’s it. NO ONE CAN DIE!!!! We can’t kill any of our characters here, but feel free to hint at a death in your book if you wish.
And that means Zlatan and Vulk had better not get to Ocran at this point.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Sorry y’all, I had to pause for dinner.
Zlatan
He wanted to smile.
But instead he gently took Nyx’s paw in his hand, careful not to move the broken bone. Thank the Maker it was only one. “This will hurt for a moment.”
“I SAID I’d bite. Didn’t you- OW!?!!”
Nyx gave something between…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
The blood was washed off his hands. It hadn’t taken long, but every second felt like a minor eternity right now.
“Riker, I’m going to help you up. If you can’t walk, don’t worry. I don’t expect you to.” He knelt beside the soldier, placing an arm under his shoulders, and helped…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
I’m not sure what he would call him, soooo…feel free to use what ever Nix wants.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
The voice of a ten year old lad shattered all the quiet left in his mind. Zlatan flinched and nearly dropped the reeds he’d gathered. For some reason this hasn’t been what he’d thought of when he first learned the fox talked.
Yet he seemed to be the least affected.
“Eva, put him down.”
She…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
November knelt beside him, and Viktor realized the other boy was trembling.
“Umm…” Viktor winced as November’s voice cracked. “A-Are you oh kay?”
Not the most logical question, but it made Riker smile, which was good. Viktor glanced at November to see the boy’s hand unconsciously steal up to je…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Vulkasin grinned and started after Alyona. “Sounds v’onderful to me. And comrade,” he turned a thoughtful face to Franz. “Of course I ask children v’hat zey fink. Sometimes zey’er ze only v’ones zhat do.”
Vulkasin waited for a moment, unconsciously looking for that beloved side look…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
The fox sat glaring at him, one paw held at an awkward angle.
Ah Nyx…
Zlatan stepped closer, trying to see what was wrong with the forepaw, but Nyx hissed and twitched away, hackles raised.
“I’m not going to hurt you.” He stepped back satisfied in a rather unsatisfactory way. “You need a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Sounds good!
And for some reason I’ve been thinking of Nyx starting off the conversation by calling Zlatan names…*snicker*
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
(@freedomwriter76 thank you so very much!😊)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
“Is November okay?” Riker paused, moaned. “Am I supposed to be…is it nighttime already?”
The blood drained from Mikkel’s face, but he lifted a hand. “How many fingers and I holding up?”
Riker blinked, squinted. “Three?”
Mikkel dropped his hand, mild relief bring ing back some color…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
(@freedomwriter76 just Bronwen again! This is actually an old picture of her but it’s very cute so I still use it. I call her my undercover cinnamon bun because she’s adorable when she’s not being grumpy)
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Ava Blue replied to the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
W O W

No joke, that sounded like it was out of a book (and a very good book, at that)
I love your writing style! I am astounded by both your ability to write dialogue and your ability to include that many spaces in a single post. Bravo!!! 🥳🎉👏
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Eva stood in the middle of a room. Zlatan quickly wiped clean his blade, stuffing the oil cloth back into it’s place. He sheathed his sword before coming into the room.
A golden fluff ball curled up in her arms.
Nyx.
Oy this fox was not happy to see him.
Zlatan closed the door behind him,…[Read more]
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