@lrose5
Active 2 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Sypher
“Super powers?” He frowned, his eyes falling to the desk in front of him. Tiny water droplets crowded together giving the wood a bubbled, speckledy look. Syph shooed them away.
“Super powers. I like that, but…” His brother’s voice, angry and scared, echoed from a not distant enough memory. “No, I’m a water Sprite.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
YES?!?!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.
Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Btw, did y’all see the watercolor Syph my sister posted to the art section a bit back?
Syph
“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”
Syph blinked, flushed blue, then white. The air in the classroom hung he…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I need to write too. XD
Actually though, I’m trying to make my writing itself be consistent. I’m finding it hard to keep a balance of action/description/dialogue. That makes it even harder to write, because what I do write doesn’t even sound like the same book. Or needs a lot of action to connect it, but not summed up, sped through action like…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
AHH! Godly is here!
*Hugs*
What do we have here? A November scene?!
*Excited reading*
*Meets this Callan and his cuckoos.*
Who is this creep?
*plots to cause him destruction*
*finishes reading*
Aw, November, it’s not your fault, dearie.
Great section! Grammatically, the writing is rough, but the scenes flows well. Vivid…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I need to work on consistency, which I get is mostly self-discipline (and which is something I’ve always had to work on, writing life aside). I want to write, but I don’t have to write, and there are many things in my life right now that I have to do. Setting aside a specific time to do what I want, even when I’m tired, has been hard. But I’m tr…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Callan’s….oof. I
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
*Slowly freaks out*
November scenes!!! She’s writing again!! November! Ara! Ahhhhhhhhhhh-
*Freaking out escalates tenfold*
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
As for the other stuff, I really appreciated the themes you worked with. That we can’t love ourselves as we should through our own eyes. We have to see us (and others) through God’s love, light, hope. That isn’t easy, but it’s worth it.
I liked the order, how you spliced poem and story together. It made it easy to read and follow.
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Wow. That sixth story was dark, but I know it’s needed.
It’s sad how many people indulge in self harm just “trying to feel”, but since it looks “normal”, like tattoos, piercings, or extreme diets, other people don’t see it for what it is.
My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.
*sees clean gesture drawing*
*is in bliss*
I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…
I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Ah! Hi, Lois! Your sister is intense. XD Alyona and Nadian are roughly her age, but the girls are homeschooled currently. They weren’t ready to attend another school. And they’re definitely behind her in grades. They do need developing, though.
Having the boys in the same first class sounds like a plan to me. @whalekeeper what do you think?
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
*Cracks knuckles*
First off, that sounds awesome.
Second, Thursday? That’s a pretty tight crunch, but you can do this. Right? Right.
I’ll read through and give what thoughts I have ect. and (if you’d like) typos/errors I catch. What type of accountability do you want? I can email you daily, you can email me, whatever you…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Basically what everyone has said. XD
But since I must have my own take documented..
I believe everyone it on a path either towards for away from God. Everyone is seeking the One that can fill the hole in their lives. If you have that, then you have a duty to share it. Similarly, if you believe others will actually face eternal doom,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
It looks like we’ll be at a church training thing this Saturday, so I probably won’t be able to join. That said, you’re welcome to send an email link, and if I happen to be free I’ll bounce on.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator
It is being attempted. *cracks knuckles*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 months ago
Ah, your moodbard is beautiful! You did a fantastic job! I’m curious about this fellow. Is he a protagonist?
Whatever tips I have may be irrelevant since I can see them in your work already. Basically, look for coordinating colors and moods between pictures, and play with a style until you feel like it fits the character. Also, choose…[Read more]
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