@lrose5
Active 2 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Koshka replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 hours, 9 minutes ago
Subscribing as well!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 hours, 47 minutes ago
Aha! *subscribing*
A blurb would be good! Then of course a good intro to the Main Characters, because I really liked their aesthetics and want to know what they have to say for themselves.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 hours, 46 minutes ago
*erupts from the shadows*
AH! I love them all!!!
Both of “Barons’s” works are exquisite. I really like the cat eye. Both have have so much character in them.
The kiddo is adorable! His little hands… just so precious.
Dante is incredible. I have only once done a cyclops-like thing, and it was in a “Pembric’s Creaturepedia” style so I…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 50 minutes ago
WHAT HAVE YOU TWO DONE?? XD
That’s just plain brilliance. Disastrous indeed, but brilliant nonetheless.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 57 minutes ago
Welp. This has taken a while. I’m gonna do something though…
By the way, what does Brea look like again? She’s sounding a lot like Nadian, who has black curls, a dusky rose-olive complexion, and dark brown eyes. Basically a little girl version of Viktor but with their mother’s facial structure. Alyona favors their…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 29 minutes ago
Okay! I’m currently waiting for a class to start, but I’ll RP afterwards if Whaley hasn’t yet. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 35 minutes ago
*Nods*
*Is concerned because that’s exactly what Helmer always says*
*Doesn’t know if Helmer drank much tea, but offers it anyway*
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 42 minutes ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 47 minutes ago
Ah, I see. How is this?
“An elf lord who employs orcs.” he straightened to face Travenor. They stared at each other for a long moment while the rest of us stood in suspense. Well, not me. I knew.
“For the love of life!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was him.”…
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 39 minutes ago
Erm…….he probably thinks that’s great…..
*Whips around towards door and screams*
Ellette, what have you been saying?!
XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
Also….
Why would Onnendel be sending orcs to hunt his own band? And then give himself away by a notable device on his minions’ uniforms?
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
OOOOOOPS. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun. How is this?
“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him. Bân-Sercëon.” He spat out the name in a half-voiced growl.
Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
What? XD Oh no. I’ll tweak that. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun.
Onnendel is not the traitor. It would be a great twist, but he’s too much of Aenwest’s cinnamon roll to have a negative arc..
Plus… Backstory. Lots of backstory….
They’ll talk more about that in the next two chapters.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested
The next chapter is up!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
In Which Orcs Stink, and Dwogin Plays Hockey
Chapter 6
“Cowards and kettledrums!” Dwogin bellowed. His axe sprang into his hand and the stout warrior went charging into the first line of the ambushment. Orcs flew like flies over a hotly contested piece of garbage. I gagged.
In the chaos that ensued, I caught a glimpse of Onnendel and Tra…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
I’ll try to join. Do you have a deadline yet? =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
Throwing in a short RP.
Leo
He raked a hand over the back of his neck and let out a soft sigh.
“We need a plan to either make these creeps move on, or kick them out. Not sure which one of those will be easier. Although…” His gaze trailed over to Quincy, sound asleep with a fist curled in Silvia’s skirt. He…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 11 hours ago
I guess I have a magic system, but it’s more a power system. In my KoS/Shattered Kingdoms series, there are unseen powers behind almost everything. Influences from the races of the Lighted and the Faded on the race of Blood. (Made the names up on the spot. XD) It’s pretty obviously allegorical, but I’m having fun developing it as if it’s not so I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 23 hours ago
That’s pretty cool! I haven’t read a lot of mythology, or books with fake religions, but having a base for the mythology out of “real” history makes sense. In fact, something like that might help solve a few issues of my own, like why this other country has such a mixed up system of government and religion.
*Gazes off into the abyss*
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