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Active 2 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 13 hours, 59 minutes ago
Thought you might be interested. Here’s the playlist I randomly decided to compile for Leo’s story (CotR)
Instrumental – aesthetic music
From “Sounds of Power” Epic instrumental
- “Faith”
- “The Key”
- “Got Fight”
- “Courage”
From Emily Black’s “Cloak of the Light” sound track
- “The Fine Art of Sarcasm”
- “Chicago”
- “Be…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 17 hours, 11 minutes ago
I would say keep any gender issues out of MG. I was reading MG at 7ish, and my parents never told me about any of that stuff until I was a teen. Finding out about it, even from a Biblical perspective, would have traumatized tiny me.
That’s a valid point! What I meant is illustrated anyway in a decent book. Have your characters behave…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 day, 10 hours ago
Also, there’s a difference between the Chosen One trope and a For Such a Time mentality. I would love to see the true value of humanity, of the reader, addressed. That we are made with purpose and by intention. There is hope. God doesn’t waste His time making and loving children just to destroy them in Hell. This is why we cannot decide to be a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 day, 10 hours ago
GREAT point.
Why thank you. XD
Honestly, if you do want to write MG fiction (and I hope you do) I recommend doing some research into the psychology of 8-13 year olds. Not only will it help your writing, it will help you understand your readers, and your own memories. (On that note, try to remember what it was like to be a kid, not…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 day, 10 hours ago
-What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Humor. Slapstick sparingly and good wit whenever it’s needed.
I liked characters I could connect to (although considering my personality, I could empathize easily) I liked it when the suffering was real. Kids can be done of the most melodramatic people on the planet, but like Koshka said,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 10 hours ago
Ahh! Animal fantasy! I adore this stuff so much. Yes, one of my series is a bunch of wolves and foxes and possibly sea faring black footed sand cats all picking fights with one another. It’s great fun. XD
@raxforge
I definitely approve. We need more animal fantasy that isn’t down right weird. Squirrels are hilarious, and a secret kingdom…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 day, 11 hours ago
*Literally comes out of nowhere*
MG!! My genre. Yes! We need more good MG fiction.
– What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Action, but not necessarily what you’d first think of. I wanted my heros to do something that mattered, even if it was sitting in a dark closet for hours, bravely taking hardship and fighting the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
That’s perfect! I love it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
Some reads we never forget
Some books we never forgive
Haven’t seen the end of this yet
We’ll write as long as we live.
All eyes on the hidden door
To the lonely laptop borne
We’ll ride in through the scribbling storm
Till we write our long forgotten WIPs…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
In Which Trees are Dangerous, and Aenwest Considers Doubles
Chapter 7
The closer we got to the Dell, the more tangled the trees became. It should have been much like the woods around Multnomah Falls, WA, but years ago, as I told Dwogin when he tripped over an exposed root, the Rangers had planted saplings between the older trees and woven them…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested
Some days we kinda forget,
Some WIPS will never go on.
Gotta get the rest of it done,
All the way to the Silver Star.
(Far away, through writer’s block so bold.)
*cough cough*
Although it’s been neglected, it has not been abandoned. We have another chapter!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 16 hours ago
Like the others said, that depends on your characters. (They had some great advice.)
I think it would also depend on how expected/tragic the death was. While doesn’t necessarily lessen grief, it makes a lot of difference in how one processes it. (I think. Not an expert.) In some ways it would be worse, especially if they were…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 14 hours ago
I am interested! April will be really busy, but if I can join, I’ll tell you. Whatever we do, I should be able to join on Saturday mornings or early Friday afternoons.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 14 hours ago
Squirrelies! I love the fluffies. They are very intelligent. Unimaginative people completely discredit them. I think some of your rogue squirrels are running a gang in our town. XD The initiation rites include darting between the wheels of a car.
(@rae You definitely tagged the right people. 🙂 )
As for feedback, the idea is…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What are your most influential childhood books? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 days, 12 hours ago
Most influential so the ones I still remember. XD That simplifies things.
I grew up listening to the Focus on the Family Radio Theater rendition of the Chronicles of Narnia, and read the books when I was about 9-ish. They really shaped my love for story, and even how I viewed God. They’re a story that grows with you as you grow…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 13 hours ago
oh nar!!! *chews lip*
I was so nervous reading that. XD Things are not looking good for November or Ara.
I think my heart literally stopped when Callan showed up. I had to escape the forum for a moment before coming back to finish reading it. XD *shudders* Once more, fantastic villains. I loathe their guts.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 15 hours ago
Poor Hugo! Save him, Marcel!
Probably a good thing you moved Viktor on. I think he’d either die from shock, or by attacking the thing with his pocket knife. As it is, he’d feel terrible for leaving Hugo in that situation, but it’s for the best. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Wowsers. That’s a lot! Sounds fascinating, though.
I’ll try to find that article… I think it was in Jstor…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
AHHHH! It’s perfect! I love it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
That’s really cool.
I know it would be a ton of work, but it’s beautiful. If you do get a comic book published, I’d buy it.
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