@loopylin
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 I don’t know, I guess it’s whatever time you want it to be.
Kad
“Ride? As in actually flying? YES. Take me flying. PLEASE.” Eddie looked as excited as Kad felt. He landed to let her get on. “Careful of my neck spikes,” he said. “You don’t want to get poked by them. They’re pretty sharp.”
As soon as she was settled,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
😁 Hehe, thanks! I did the right, right, thing once, and then again, and then it became a thing. xD I’ll send you the whole thing once I finish the last two parts. And ya’know try to write the actual novel. Writing it did help me to get my traction back, though, so it’s good. 😊
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @loopylin I’m actually working on a drawing of Kad, hopefully
I’ll have him done by tomorrow!Kad
“Hey, look! I think this door leads outside!” cried the little alien–Eddie.
“I’ll go first, just in case. Everyone, fall in behind.” said the human called Wayne, unsheathing his sword. Weird, it was metal, not like dragons’…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne started the topic WIP edits? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @ava-blue @folith-feolin
Would any of you mind reading and editing my novel? I don’t have a lot of editors right now (Thank you @loopylin for being one of the few! 😊 You’re awesome!). I only get one chapter out a week at the most and am only six chapters in now so it shouldn’t be too time-consuming. Or, if…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
Thanks!!!! 😁😊
They’re actually both in chapter six, which I am… working on. 😐 But I’ll send it to you once it’s finished! I think Grant is slowly replacing Cammie as my favorite, too.
(Elissa is the one we were talking about earlier. You gave me the idea, so thanks! 🙂
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
So, I attempted a blurb. 😐 And KP won’t let me go to my profile page so I’m stuck here. Tell me what you think?! 😊
He took the maglev train.
Milo Trone has been living his life inside a simulation. Every part of his life feeds into it. It surrounded him in his childhood and stayed. He works a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Feather
Julius explained that a disease had crippled his left foot when he was young. “I know….” he sighed. “I’m nothing more than a cripple, trust me….”
“No you’re not. You’re more than that.” Feather told him, helping him up. “A….friend of mine….he had it worse off than you. He was supposed to be able…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Feather
A scream rang out.
Feather jerked her head up, fearful. Paxton froze, crying, and one of the boys–brothers–ran in the direction of the sound.
“Let me go!!” Paxton shrieked, twisting out of the other boy’s grip and running off. The rest of the characters shouted for him, but to no avail. Paxton had…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Help me name my character? in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Help me name my character? in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
Oh, I recognize the names but I can’t think of what it is! And Lemon-Head is adorable. I love your art for her, too!
Anyway, names. I have absolutely no reasoning or meaning behind these, they just popped into my head. 😊
1. Eda
2. Something that starts with a J. She seems like a J. Don’t question it. 😆
3. Bella
4. Hanna (I’ve…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Help me name my character? in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin ooh names are so much fun!! I luv finding names with MEANING!! That being said I make naming my characters way more complicated then it probably should be, but that’s because the name of a character, for me, holds so much….
im a character driven person, so I want any character I name to have depth…and it should fit!
Sooo here’…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin okay I luv Dante lol!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
November
“No, sir. Reúven and I were alone.” He turned to November. “We’d be glad to help you find your group. Reúven and I need something to keep us out of trouble anyway.” Viktor smiled playfully at his cousin.
November smiled. “Heh…th-than…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Here’s an idea for a fantasy AU with Bronwen and the crew! It’s super loose, ideas would be much appreciated.
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12I’ll go with the classic magic-has-been-outlawed-in-the-kingdom story as a base. Bronwen and company all happen to have inherited magic talents and once they find each other they gang up and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Kad
Eddie and Ellie, as the two Quilanans were called, sort of avoided the question, but Wayne and Zayne, the humans, talked about their family a bit.
Very interesting. Kad hadn’t really thought much about other species. Most which were smaller than dragons were either eaten, or if proven sentient, were left to their…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin btw the name Dante is so cool!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin Okay. The average hobbit height is three feet six inches (I looked it up), but they are anywhere between two and four feet. Using a three-foot-six character, that means Kad’s lower legs alone are about that tall, if she can barely reach his knees! I’ve been trying to figure out the human to dragon proportions, so you might’ve actually…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Kad
The smallest ones were Quilanans. Okay. He’d never heard of them, but at least now he knew what they were. (How tall are they exactly?)
The other two were…..humans, apparently. He’d seen a few of their species before, running around below the feet of dragons in the Concordia marketplace, but he’d never talked to them…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’m here, but only for a few more minutes.
@freedomwriter76 @loopylin Either of you want to do your characters? Mine just asked them what planet they’re from….
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