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GodlyFantasy12 posted a new activity comment 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin
Cool!!
So I originally thought Paxton had a bit of autism as well, but it turns out it’s actually just severe Child PTSD. Because PTSD can actually Resemble Autism, (I found an article on this I believe I put the link in character castle somewhere)
So yea! But in extreme cases of an onslaught of bad memories or emotions, Paxton will h…[Read more] -
MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Kaine
“Oh yeah?” Kaine says, noticing Mathews stuttering.
Is he just nervous? Or does talking about his sister make him nervous?
Kaine looks up at the imposing wall. Small rock portions jut out of the side, and it’s streaked coloration shows it’s age.
Have to find Evelyn.
Kaine puts his hand on the wall, feeling for a good spot to grip.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
YES!! That’s a great idea!! Maybe once we get the hang of one group, we can add the sisters. Maybe they’re already in the castle!! Oh yeah, I’ll try to put something other than ‘said’ for Simon. That would annoy me too😂.
Matthew
“Oh, twin! Nice.” Kaine said.
“Umm.” Kaine paused, looking down at t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin OOOH I LUV THAT!!!!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Thanks so much!💕 And yeah, one of my favorite parts of writing my story is helping my characters get through stuff by giving them good friends (obviously that doesn’t fix everything) 😀
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin hey so it’s totally up to y’all it doesn’t really affect us at all, but I think the original creator of this (who isn’t on here anymore) had once said that like the castle was limited to only within like the castles courtyard and the actual castle??
idk tho….
XD XD XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh ok! Yeah, cave or village, whatever works. At this point in the story, Evelyn is sitting inside all the time (Kain insists she doesn’t move a finger unless she wants to and it won’t hurt her 😂) But yeah she has a gash in her arm and I think it’s a bit infected. I say infected because she extremely tired and he helps her with…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Milo
Milo listened as the rest of the group talked about their sisters. He walked beside Cammie in the front, the rest followed behind them. His legs were starting to get sore making it harder to put each foot in front of the other. From beside him, Cammie finally spoke to the group, “Sorry,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
That sounds great! Good idea!
Not sure how that’ll work with mine, She’s injured and at this point was under Kaine’s pretty constant care. Lol, we’ll figure it out. I’d love to do that though! Whenever you want to start that is good. Let’s give the boys (and cammie) an obstacle so it isn’t immediate though… maybe they have to cross…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin
Ok sooo… I forgot Kaine sisters name 😫 I never came up for a definitive one and forgot my placeholder lol. I’ll pick something that works. Did some searching, lol were going with Everlyn. THIS IS WHY U WRITE DOWN YOUR NAMES PEOPLE!
Kaine
“Y’all are missing some sisters? I’m missing mine too” Kaine…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone
Oh okay! Lol yea, we should make a group of all the sisters inside the castle!
Matthew
“Yeah. Let’s go,” the boy, Simon said. Then he said, “I haven’t seen your sister, sorry. Carter and I are missing some sisters as well.” My face fell. She was 8 minutes older than me, she was supposed to be taking c…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone
Lol, Cammie had enough 😂.
Matthew
“I’m Matthew,” I told the red head. “Who are you? Do you know where we are?” I asked. The red head looked me up and down, then said, “My name is Kaine. And no, I have never seen this place in my life.” He looked as if he were about to say something, when I heard a…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
So my incredibly busy schedule is letting off for just a little bit so I can finally get on here.
Milo
Milo stared at the two boys panting beside their group. He looked to his left to see Cammie turning away from everyone and walking away.
“Wait, where are you going!” Milo jogged after her and…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Random Ideas Forum! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @joy-caroline @anyone-else-cuz-idk XD
HEEEEEEEYOOOOO!
So I made this forum because idk about y’all buuuut I have a feeling I’m not the only person who has a toooon of books ideas….that I never actually get to write about/discuss but really want to….
Actually Ik for a fact I’m not the only…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Well, I didn’t know that! I guess it turned out to be perfect!
Feather would totally adopt Paxton if she could….not that either of their worlds would allow that……lol
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @loopylin Anyone on? I’m waiting for someone else to RP to reveal what that sound was.
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah! Thank you for the suggestions.
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, that’s how I feel too sometimes. We shouldn’t worry though, no one in KP would say anything bad about our writing. Everyone is so sweet here. 🙂
Awww Thank you!!
Yeah!
Oh okay!! Yeah I don’t think that will be a thing. I mean, they’ll have their arguments and stuff, but overall they’re very close. No, you’re fine!!…[Read more]
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Light started the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
So, I’ve got this idea for a novel—actually more than one, and I’m trying to figure out if it sounds good. And y’all feel free to add your ideas too!!
So my idea is this: There are two siblings, a boy and a girl, and they are orphans. They live at an orphanage that they hate. Then suddenly one day, someone comes to visit them. It’s an aunt that th…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I am on now!
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Crosshair
Grimm and Leo weren’t that different….
For that matter, neither was he. Maybe he hadn’t lost a sibling, but their situations were somewhat similar…..
He didn’t have anything to add to the conversation, so he just watched.
“Thank you. Really.” Leo sai…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Ahh, makes sense! Poor Paxton!
@elishavet-pidyon Cool!
@loopylin That’s a nice drawing! Oh, by the way, do you want to RP next? I just did one yesterday.
Feather
“We should probably keep going. See if we can find any others. I’m sure the rest of my companions are here…somewhere.” Grimm looked…[Read more]
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@godlyfantasy12 You mentioning that about Paxton in the castle is actually what made me start thinking about it! The PTSD and autism overlap is really interesting. I really enjoy learning about psychology and things like that.
@freedomwriter76 Oh! A deaf and mute boy sounds really hard but fun to write😃. I remember reading a fantasy book that…[Read more]