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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed
I have another snippet! This scene is like my new comfort scene. It gives me warm fuzzies inside.
(Set just after Tauren and Lesli exit into the outside world, and have relaxed a little)
Tauren watches the water ripple, blurring his reflection into itself. A couple small fish flit through the water.…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
Ayla: I have an older brother named Josh. He’s kind of annoying, but I generally like him.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009, @keilah-h, @stephie, @loopylin, @theshadow
Next Chapter! I finished a little early this week. It’s from Tyn’s perspective for all you Tyn fans. To be honest, most of what occurred in this chapter I did not know would happen until after I sat down to write.
Since I finished early, I am going to use the rest of this week to…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
Now my mom says I don’t talk slurred, I just abbreviate everything I say and/or jump to rhetorical conclusion, which leads people to react as if my speech is messed up.
Sorry my brain is attached to this topic 😅 Is your voice higher or lower pitched?
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
Ayla: “I pride myself in my ability to do an exceptional dramatic death. Once I sprained my wrist from doing it on tile, so I usually try to do it on the carpet. Sometimes I deliberately lose stick sword duels with my brother so I can die tragically after he stabs me.”
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Enid replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
Yeah, it’s weird to think about 🙃
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @anyone
Okay. Ayla is 15, and from a spyfi. She has waist length dark brown hair, brown eyes, pale skin, pink cheeks, and is about 5′ 7”. I don’t have an image for her yet.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you!
@keilah-h, @stephie, @loopylin, @theshadow
My goal for this week is to write and post Chapter the 7th.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @loopylin @whalekeeper
exactly. If I am portraying it wrong, I need to change it. I just don’t want to change it yet because something has changed inside of Chase, and I need to figure out what it is first. That was what I was trying to say.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I don’t think anyone was saying that you need to change Chase. Like Loopy and Whaley said, it’s not bad that he has that flaw, because he’s a flawed character that grows and changes in your story. We were just concerned that you were portraying him as more of a hero and that flaw was celebrated.
@whalekeeper @loopylin correct me if I’m wrong…XD
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.
I understand your concerns, but as of now, I’m not going to change anything with Chase and just keep him going on the path I have laid so far. The reason is there’s something different in Chase. I haven’t…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
It’s complicated 🥲 I moved from the Midwest to the South four years ago.
I start talking in a southern accent whenever I’m being playful (I already knew how since I was a huge fan of Mark Twain) or romantic? And I shift without noticing. Like I call my mom “momma” now, and I call my dad “dadder” with a twang. None of the rest of my…[Read more] -
Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I was at camp all last week so yeah, it’s hard writing after social stuff.
Also I’ve been binge watching doctor who so that’s probably what’s filling up the story portion of my brain
Have fun! I’ve only watched the first season of Doctor Who, but I have Doctor Who pajamas. And a Doctor Who shirt. Both of which I got from a neighbor g…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
😡 Are you trying to test our friendship or somethin?!?
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Enid replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Nope!
@everyone I will get back to this after I finish an over-thought-out expression sketch for one of my characters.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I saw what you wrote and I agree with that too 😛
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Girl are you psychic or something? Because I couldn’t figure out exactly how I felt about Chase’s sacrifice until you just voiced it.
Exactly!!!! XD XD
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Girl are you psychic or something? Because I couldn’t figure out exactly how I felt about Chase’s sacrifice until you just voiced it. That’s exactly what I was trying to say 😂 I can understand why it’s tempting to write a character getting their way though. It’s basically their element, even though it’s a flaw.
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