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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
This will answer your question about the feedback I’m looking for.
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @loopylin @theshadow
I made up a feedback file with questions I would like you to answer about my book. Do you have to? No. I understand if it’s too much and if you don’t have enough time, but I would really…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Here is the discussion guide. It’s rought right now. It was inspired by the discussion guides at the end of the second edition books for The Wingfeather Saga. However, I think that’s resulted in it being written for a younger audience than my book is aimed at (I’m…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
End credits song! (This was the most fitting version of this song I could find. As an aside, if you haven’t, look up the history of this song.)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Happy Boxing Day! (do you celebrate this in the USA?) Let’s box this draft up with the final chapter!
There is one more thing I need to write for this that I will do later. A discussion guide for the reader. After that I will have…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@loopylin thanks!!
hehe the story of his name was that I found this image of a 3D modeled chameleon
then texted it in my friend’s group chat and asked them to name him. Someone said Gerald and sent me the picture (not this one specifically but a similar one) with a cute little hat drawn on it. I don’t remember who.
But when I saw the stuffed…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint @stephie @liberty @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @mineralizedwritings @grcr
Here’s the movie balled. Oh the music! It was amazing!!!
This is a story I can stand behind concerning women fighting. She fought when she was defending women and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint @stephie @liberty @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @mineralizedwritings @grcr
HAS ANYONE SEEN THIS!!!!!????
It was amazing!!!! I saw it in theaters with friends and am now trying to scrape together the money to take my family! It was AMAZIN…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
I love that all three of them need stools to reach the counter XD
Plus, they’re expected to get so much done all by themselves, in comparison with all the cafeteria workers. XD
Seb
“Ha, nice. I used to have a white rat when I was five… Or was it a kitten? I could hold it in my hand.” Seb pulled a hand out of the sink and studied…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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Lenny replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @Esther-c @Jonas and @theducktator
Okay, so merry Christmas guys! Chapter 1 is out on page 9! hope you guys read through it and enjoy! Make sure to vote on who you want to see eliminated and what challenge the contestants participate in next! And thank you to those who voted! <3
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter.
I’ll see you after Christmas with the final chapter! Merry Christmas to you all!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Uh, idk who’s participating in this, so here’s some tags.
@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @arcticanimals theducktator @esther-c @jonas @liberty
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I think so to. XD
*Let’s him read that* *he blushes and is confused*
Viktor (Library)
“I’m Brea,” she said as she began putting his books in order. “Is it okay if I work at the same table as you?”
“Je… Yeah. Of course. I’m Viktor.” He grinned and joined her. His English book had a dent on the cover, but the more dese…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings
I would shop more if I didn’t have sTinKiN’ [insert bad words here] dissociative episodes in the middle of a clothes-rack. People walk down the aisle and all they see are these eyes: O.O
ridiculous impulse buys are the best
This is true. I once bought a green dress without thinking about it, unlike all my other…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Ha, that’s what I thought.
I can’t believe I added this in the RP like 50+ pages ago. XD Felt like it would come in use for something. There are a lot of people who need to pet a puppy.
Seb
Seb cocked his head at Eddie’s comment, but didn’t say anything about it. “Maybe. He was on my bed in the dorm.”
He watched them fondle the…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I didn’t forget about the Twins! I told you I wouldn’t forget! My character still owes detention duty.
Seb
There was a small cough. The twins turned around to find Sebastian in the kitchen doorway.
He looked down at his baggy shirt, then slowly raised a hand. “Hi. I took a nap. …Sorry for coming late.”
The girls nodded. Eddie held…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin
The way a person shops actually tells you so much about them
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