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@jonas That’s a cool system. So soulforging works on any metal object? Do you have any characters with enchanted jewelry then?

Thanks!

Yes, it works on any metal. I haven’t completely decided yet, but metals might have varying properties that makes some better for certain things, but any metal could be Soulforged in some way. (Of co…[Read more]

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Sure! (Don’t worry, I won’t plagiarize lol)

Okay, then, a crash course on Awakening it is! (Minor spoilers if anyone reading this happens to plan on reading that book.)

So, in the world of Warbreaker, every person is born with one Breath, which on its own doesn’t really do anything. However, you can give your Breath to someone else, at…[Read more]

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Your magic system sounds so so so cool! I absolutely love it!

@loopylin @ellette-giselle

😁🤪🫠🤫

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Take your time! All is well. If you need to focus on the stuff in your life, I say do it and not let any of us (who you only know through a screen) hinder you.

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same. I think There are only a few sane people still left on KP who haven’t done that.

@loopylin

Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD

I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?

Ideas ideas

– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit

– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]

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Inky magic system

This is probably the coolest magic system I’ve ever heard of.

@jonas

@loopylin @raxforge

Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, and Jenna following after Felicity. 

Brutus watched the creatures coming his way, dropping down his scarf. He didn’t know if the small band could out run the things. Could he muster enough wind to carry them away? He could try. A powerful wind came to him, and he turned…[Read more]

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Flare and Ben Gunn – Elderstrand (w/ Baron, Jenna, and Ellis going to follow Felicity)

“That’s awfully spic- HOLY!!” Ben said as he turned around staring at the swarm of creatures.

Flare turned around with Ben, “Why do I have to be out of spells?”

The swarm started to get closer to them. Ben nodded, “We should r…[Read more]

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Ellis – Elderstrand (w/ Ben, Flare, Baron, following Felicity and Brea)

“Whatever made that sound,” Ellis said, glancing backward. “I don’t–Brutus! Come on! We’ve got to get out of here!”

He stopped, turning around. Just then with the sound of pounding feet, he saw a swarm of bounding spindly creatures burst into the…[Read more]

@loopylin

It seems a bit limitless to me, I guess.

Okay, I can see that. Yeah, I have had similar problems where I made a magic system that has a very simple premise, but as a result, I was worried that there were a bunch of overpowered applications of it that I hadn’t considered yet.

So, I guess my first question would be, what can a sentient…[Read more]

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What in particular do you want help with? It sounds pretty cool to me. I could probably help, but I’m not sure what you want to improve.

@power  @ellette-giselle  @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper  @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity

So, I thoug…[Read more]

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*pops head in the door*

*sees current conversation*

READ.

ELLA.

ENCHANTED.

@loopylin

Um, yes?! It was a book before a movie, and the book is awesome.

And thank you. I love the little feathery guys too. Who needs regular street rats if you can have wats and wouses fluttering around.

@loopylin

Love the genderbent Smee

I choked on my own breathing 🤣😭

@godlyfantasy12

It makes me so sad they didn’t do it. I think there might be a book series out or releasing which is written about Tinker Academy. That’s all I’ve heard. I found a fun video essay about it on YouTube, but haven’t finished it. Tinkerbell was such a thing for me as…[Read more]

@loopylin THX!! I can’t remember what spurred that…except maybe just me being like “Let’s make Smee a girl!!” Honestly, when I first begun writing fairytales, I loved making twisted fairytales. I had a whole 22 book series planned called Twysted tales, and my favorite thing was changing them up! There was so many ways to change SO MANY THINGS…[Read more]

@loopylin definitely! @whalekeeper WHAT?! THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN AWESOME!