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Koshka replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Okay, the Starlight song, what is the story behind those lyrics? Because those last few lines seemed to get really specific…
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Except @loopylin
She’s an absolute weirdo, don’t know what to make of her
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
True. It’s small and cute though.
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Kefa replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Ah, okay. Thank you! (I hate fandoms…)
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@anyone what classes do you want to do?
Barnes is overseeing some literature-related class, so there’s that
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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freedom started the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia @gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @theducktator @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @trailblazer @acancello @godlyfantasy12…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Lucky Barnes, your author lets you have good things. Sniper’s parents will be dead halfway through the storyline and he’s still a bit messed up from it afterward. And it’s not even my fault.
Lucky in some ways, unlucky in others. XD I decided over the past year or so that I don’t like writing characters with just trauma+healing as thei…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I’ve thought of the Lockwood one before but didn’t mention it
NOooOOo *Muffled drama* I suppose it is unavoidable. They are both sad tea lovers. Well then, you should know Hugo was a fixed thing before I ever read about or watched Lockwood.
It bothered me so much for a long time. I’ve been trying pretty hard to make them different since…
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
If your main characters have ever been compared to characters in a tv show or something similar, please make a meme about it. I would very much like to see. Just post it without any context.
Mine:
Now you. 🫵
@loopylin @rae @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @eehhthisappliestoeveryone
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Esther posted an update 3 weeks ago
Ok, I’m tagging a lot of people for this, but don’t feel obligated to reply.
So, I’ve gotten stuck in my current WIP, but as I work through that slowly, I want to return to an older WIP that I worked on over the summer and really want to refine. It’s only in a first draft, but I’d like to have a critique partner for it.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
Participants/potential participants:
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity @freed_and_redeemed @liberty @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore
(tagging people who seem to like mood boards.
Maybe) @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @keilah-hNew Character I just added into my WIP. (originally he was the be…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 1 day ago
should I tag? Eh why not!
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore@raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @stephine
and @shadow
(I am so sos sososososossoso sorry If I put you tag more…[Read more]
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TheShadow started the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Hello all, how’s everyone doing?
Recently, while writing my first draft for my WIP, I have been struggling with scenes actually connecting to each other and running in a smooth way that makes sense. Additionally, I feel like I’m forcing my characters to do something without actually letting them decide and let their decisions have consequences.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
I also debated the ‘could actually kill you’ because could he actually? My sister said Rory would pop emotionally before killing anybody. (Not meaning he is weak, Ellette, just that he wouldn’t do it.)
He’s killed several times.
We don’t talk about that.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Alright moving on, let’s get this day wrapped up
Seb
“Shift’s up!”
One of the kitchen hands yelled in their direction, causing all three kids to jump. Soap suds fluttered to the floor.
Seb dropped what he was about to say. He grabbed the puppy and handed it to Ellie, covering it with a towel. “We don’t want to lose him, right? You…[Read more]
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Actually, I’mma remake the moodboards, hehehe. So they shall be revealed later this week. :PP
@esther-c
I replied but didn’t tag you. Not sure if you got it.
I would be willing to try and help with this. You know my views on Romance are rather different than norm, and I believe highschool romantic relationships aren’t healthy. But I’m willing to give it a shot.
I also do edit. I’m not a line-by-line editor, but I have worked as a plot/character/story editor before.
We do have different beliefs on…[Read more]
I appreciate the offer!! Truly!
But like you said, we might not work super well together because of our different viewpoints. So yeah, right now I’d say no, but I will keep you in mind! :))
No problem! I can be your last resort if no one else offers. 😉
Sounds good. 😉 Let me know if you want to be tagged when I post the chapters on here some time! :))
Mm. Sounds interesting, but I’m totally unqualified. I don’t think I’d be able to help much… Sorry… 😅😑
Hey no worries! 🤗
I’m sorry, I don’t think I can help you 🙁
That’s totally fine, girl! ☺️
I’m definitely interested in reading your novel, but I’ve read almost no YA, so I wouldn’t be much help.
No worries! I’ll be sure to tag you tho when I start sharing it on here!!
Awesome! 🙂
@esther-c I would love to help! This went into my spam for some reason, so I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you. Are you still looking for someone?
Actually…I think you might be perfect. You gave some great feedback on my short story, so I’m sure you could do the same for my novel! :))
I’ll PM you later this week with more details and the link to the doc. Thank you so much!!! 🤗
Awesome! I love family and sibling dynamics, and I also read a good amount of YA, so this seems right up my alley! (Although I won’t be able to help much with the 90s references, haha.)
Do you still have my email from the short story critique?
Yay yay!! (Oh I know, right?? I’ve asked my parents and some other older writers I’ve met through KDWC, and even though they gave me a lot to use [plus Google, lol], there’s still something difficult about getting it right since I didn’t live then 🤪)
Yes I believe so!
@esther-c Yeah, that totally makes sense! I was gonna say, ask your parents xD. But I’m sure it’s still difficult.
Great!! 😄
I may have to get some YA recs from you sometime, because I struggle to find clean fiction that I would actually enjoy 😭
Oh definitely! I’m sure I can come up with a list. Middle grade stuff can be great if it’s well done, because content is so much better. 😉
@hybridlore
Please tag me if you post recommendations! I want to read YA, but it’s usually filthy and cringe.
For sure!! Until you come across that one middle school relationship that somehow works out perfectly. 😂
Ok for some reason even though I still see your comments on the short story doc, it won’t let me view your email. 😅 Could you share that again with me so I can share the other doc?? I’ll tell you as soon as I see it if you don’t want to leave your email up.
Awesome! Tysm!! I’ll probably send you the doc tomorrow since I need to make a few notes on it first. :))
Ok I added you to the document! You should get an email about it I believe. (:
Hoo boy. I’d love to, but uhhhh…I wouldn’t be any help. I’m a terrible critiquer and my romance experience is practically nil. You would probably help me more than I help you….sorry!
Funny enough though, my own romance work (a fanfic) took place in 1970 in New Mexico. What are the odds?
Ahh, no problem! :))
No way! That’s so cool! XD
Yeah it was just a consequence of how the original story was set up, but it’s funny to think about.
I doubt your characters will experience anything even close to mine though lol
Oh dear, was it a Star Wars fanfic?? In that case, I hope my charries aren’t handling the types of weapons they use. 🤣
No, it was something else, but yeah there were a lot of weapons involved XD
My Star Wars fanfics don’t really cross over into our world. Yet.
Though I suppose in a fanfic, you could do whatever 🤷🏻♀️
Oh duhhhh 🤦🏻♀️ I’ve watched like all the Star Wars movies, I should know they don’t take place on earth 🤣
lolllll no biggie.