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Felicity started the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
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Here is the first chapter of my WIP Overcome for anyone who wants to read it! I hope you all enjoy. Please critique it ruthlessly.
Glossary of…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity
Okay, heres the beginning of my old story, that I already posted so you won’t be completely lost bc it just plunges right back in XD.
Once apon a time there was a camel. The camel loved to drink some water at the forest and he swam across the ocean so he could get some water…
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Sure! I’m good with that! @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings Thoughts??
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
I leaned against the wall, fiddling with a string on my shirt. Then I heard footsteps. And voices. Me and the rest of the group stiffened, waiting for something to happen.
The heavy wooden door opened, and a group of people was revealed.
There was Kaine, another young man, and…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Eeee! Cammie and Milo! 💕 I didn’t know they were a couple at this point
XD that was funny.
Lol, yeah. They aren’t a couple yet in my WIP, but I was tired of waiting so they’re together here 😂 Although technically they aren’t a couple at the end of my WIP, but they’re definitely going in that direction. It’s more o…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
Cammie
Elissa sighed, “What are we supposed to do?”
She has a good point. Cammie spoke up to the whole group, “Guys, we can’t just wait here in this room. We need to do something. We’ve found shelter, but we still need food and water.”
“We shouldn’t be aimlessly wandering,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I finally read chapters 3 and 4! I’m sensing a Keiryn redemption arc…
🤐
Also, the Tauren drawing is adorable!💕
Thank you!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Music 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @loopylin @felicity @whalekeeper @arien @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6
Idk why I keep on forgetting this! Everytime I upload a chapter of my WIP here, I forget to attach the music that goes with my it!
That’s “start over” by Royal Tailor. I assume some of you guys…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6
Kaine and Everly
Kaine and Everly enter a large room, with the rest of the group waiting. Kaine sits down against the wall, watching the conversations and reunions occur.
Anyone have ideas for what should happen next?
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76
Milo
“So… you just write what you want to say, tell it to send, and it just delivers the message for you?” Carter asked Milo about his wristband. They were all sitting in the room above the trapdoor, waiting for anything.
“Yeah.” He would’ve guessed that this was obvious, but a…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Chapter 5 I think?
@felicity @starofthenorth @arien @theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyoneelse!
Random art of Tauren: he is probably like 8 here? idk. I dunno if he still plays guitar 😂
Tauren walks out the door with purpose, having chosen to wear a sweater with his overalls instead of his work…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
The Guy Womback/Womack story is hilarious! Your family reunions must have been something else if all your cousins were coming up with morbid thriller stories!!!! 🤣 The imaginations of childhood….
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Felicity replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @am I missing anyone on this topic?
Hello again, amazing, talented people!!! Unfortunately I got sick on Monday so I haven’t been on here since, but I’m finally starting to feel better! (my head’s cleared enough to be able to make coherent…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @starofthenorth @arien @freedomwriter76 @anyoneelse
Um… here’s the comic I wrote when I was eightish. Enjoy?
(I’m putting it in a different post so it doesn’t disappear)
(Also, it has no connections to DC’s Supergirl. They have different colors, okay? And plagiarism doesn’t exist for eight-year-olds.)
🤣
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I’m good with that! Do whatever you need to do :).
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Arien replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth
So here is one of the first things I wrote. It’s called “The Adventure #2.” I don’t know what happened to “The Adventure #1” but it did exist. It was about my stuffed animals coming alive and going under my bed to see what was there. I had so many stuffed animals, LOL.…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Sure! Do whatever you need to. I’d just like Everly and Kaine to stick to together.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
We just finished putting up our Christmas Tree!!! 🙂 My brother just read this RP, and he called Everly “Mount Everest.” XDD. He loves coming up with funny/crazy nicknames.
Lyla
The boy collapsed into Everly’s arms, sobbing. He was breaking my heart–no, he had shattered…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Sorry I didn’t see what you said until I posted that.
Oh you’re fine!!Carter and Simon have no idea what a phone is. 😆 (I know, they talk like modern Americans but they’re from a less advanced world.)
Oh okay! XD Yeah, they do! Lol.But we could just do a short time jump to when Kaine leads the group back to where the boys are. I’m…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76@lightoverdarkness6 @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @felicity @anyone @arien @starofthenorth
(Pls read chapter 3 first if you haven’t 😀)
Chapter 4
“Dad I’m going to go hang out with some friends.” Keiryn calls into the living room from the door.
Lesli glances up briefly from her writing, but quickly glanc…[Read more]
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