@loopylin
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @loopylin @esther-c Aww poor Everton! Matthew (my character) is always tripping/falling so when he sees Ev fall and knock down the armor😂 he’s probably gonna be like, “Yes! Finally, someone gets me!” XD
Matthew
Kaine and Everly fell backwards into a black hole. Kaine yelled, “We’re fine, Don’t worry about us!”…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 (I think that’s everybody 😅)
Amidala
Amidala woke up with a start. She blinked her eyes open and looked around her. Stone walls? She pushed herself off the cold ground beneath her and tried to take in her surroundings. Was this a dream? Next to her, Everton looked around with the s…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @esther-c (if you’re joining) (I don’t know who is in this group anymore xD)
Sorry it’s been so long, school has been killing me…
Anyway!
Milo
Milo stared at the empty space where Kaine and Everly had been standing before they fell. The sound of a bell echoes…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Feather
Kaine disappears.
How….?
Crosshair, who had been staring at him the whole time, steps back, shocked. “What…..”
A bell rings in the distance as the other characters eyed the place Kaine had been.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Feel free to add whoever, it can get hard to keep track of with a lot. I think we each have two in right now. 🙂
@theloonyone @loopylin @kielah-h @lightoverdarkness6
Allow me to remove Kaine and Everly from the castle, its going to be awkward but we’ll just pretend it worked just fine….
Kaine
Kaine stares at Crosshair. He turns…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @loopylin
I’m not sure who else is on here 😅
Maybe I could join in! I have an interesting villain I’m trying to develop more that I’d like to throw in, along with Ami and Ev, of course. Does that work?
Oh, and maybe Lukas too… I may just have too…
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone
Okay! Well, we’re kinda just wandering around the castle. Any of you have a villain you can bring in? Or a cool room to find?
@godlyfantasy12 you can bring in Aramis, Edrich, and/or Lilith, if you like.
Lyla and Matthew
“Crosshair, no need to be so harsh,” A young woman said, walking out f…[Read more]
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Erica started the topic I need a creature name! in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey!
So in my WIP, I have this creature that needs a name. They live underground in caves.
I picture them as a cross between Ridgerunners, Oompa Loompas, and squirrels. They’re about fourish feet tall.
They’re also slightly evil.
If any artists want to draw them, I’d love to see it!
@mineralizedwritings @madelyn @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loop…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Sensitive Topics: Abuse in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon @folith-feolin @sarafini @loopylin
Sorry I’m late to respond, but . . . finals, uffda. Anyway, here I am!
*some sort of warning here, but I’m not sure for what . . . abuse I guess, but isn’t that what this forum is about?*
As I mentioned earlier, Elinor and Aedan were abused by their guardians. It’s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing a Native American character in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Um, I may be barging in here, but I know a little about Native American reservations and stuff.
Wether or not the native language is spoken depends highly on the tribe/area, but many are still active languages. Most states have several websites for the Native Nations in their state, which are very informative and helpful. Many n…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic Writing a Native American character in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
here is the link to the museum’s website
https://americanindian.si.edu/
I agree that you should make sure that your sources are reputable. You can use Wikipedia but you have to be a little more active in your reading to tell if things are reputable or not also you should check in the talk section. Overall Wikipedia works better as a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 here’s a drawing I made from a while back ago showing something of what they look like.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing a Native American character in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin Yeah, don’t use Wikipedia if you can help it. The “wiki” part means it is maintained and edited by ordinary people rather than some admin or a knowledgeable source, which means misinformation can get spread really easily on places like that.
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Erica replied to the topic Writing a Native American character in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
I don’t really know much . . . I’ve driven through some reservations I think but never actually seen/met anyone. And like @keilah-h said, they do have their own government. I also believe they still carry on many of their tribal/religious practices.
I guess I would say the most important thing is to make it as accurate as possible so…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @freedomwriter76
Lyla
Before Julius could reply, a door leading into the hall opened quickly and two people stepped in. (@keilah-h what do they look like?)
The man had a rifle pointed at us. We all jumped up as he asked loudly, “Who are you?!”I glanced over at Matthew. His eyes were wid…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh cool! He’s trying to find the, uh… thing to the… place.
Good guess, it’s not what you’re thinking though. You’re close. 😀
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keliah-h @felicity (srry I cant remember if you’re in our group, I’m confused now lol) @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin
I’m going to swap Tauren and Lesli in for Kaine and Everly, I’m not currently writing those two so they are a bit less fun to rp. So yeah, Kaine and Everly mysteriously disappear.
Tauren: 6’2″, 16 years old. Brown…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 Here we go. Correct group.
Feather and Crosshair
“We’ve been wandering for a while…the room didn’t stretch this long before….” Feather looked around warily. “An Icehunter tried to kill us last time Rinzler and I were here. I don’t see it…it must’ve froze…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 You were the ones with the group that I was going to join, right?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @felicity @arien @starofthenorth @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 sorry if I forgot anyone!
If you feel like reading, I suggest you go back into the forum and find the other chapters first 🙂
Keiryn stares into his empty cup.
“What now?” He glances at his watch. “I’ve got 3 hours to burn.”
“I’m going to head…[Read more]
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