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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 It’s late, but hopefully this’ll keep the story going.
Allen
“I’m fine.” Serin growled when Dante asked if she was okay. “Just lost a little blood.”
“That doesn’t look fine.” Allen gestured to the wound from the beast. “I don’t know about here, but in my world, there are many venomous…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Ahh, I have not!!! 😭😮😔 So sorry about that!!! Will/Ev were going to find a frozen dragon or something…right??? 😅
Naw, you’re good. 😊
Sure! Lol XD Whatever you want do. 😁
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else-I-missed
Is there any group for Destry, Fyn…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone Sorry this is late, but here you go.
Feather
Crosshair and Elissa were back. Good. Feather was about to run over to her husband and hug him, but she knew he’d hate her doing it in front of everyone else.
“What did you find?” Beth asked. “Does anyone here even have medical experience?”
Feather perked up a bit. “Some,” she…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Hi Ava! Imma tag a bunch of people first, then I’ll respond properly:
@gwyndalf-the-wise, @mineralizedwritings, @loopylin, @esther, @lightoverdarkness6, @godlyfantasy12, @whalekeeper, @acancello, @princesschronicle22, @freedomwriter76, @80strish, @otherworldlyhistorian, @others-I-likely-forgot
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Esther started the topic No Boring Scenes?? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @sarafini @keilah-h @loopylin @felicity @elishavet-pidyon @gwyndalf-the-wise @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper
Ok… So I’ve heard that you aren’t supposed to put in your book what you were bored writing.
I don’t think this is exactly true… For example, I just finished writing a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, I’ve considered a few options like that, but my main problem is, that this has already happened in the book. Simply a side characters view point of the scenario. She is assumed to be in leauge with the villains, but this is how I’m showing that she wasn’t at all.
So it was hard for me to state it as a full flash…
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yeah the rock thing is hard to explain but I’ll kind of reveal more what it did to her in the next section when I write it. And I can definitley post that if you want me too when it’s done!
XD I’m glad you liked the nicknaming, I’ve switched their names so many times for humor, language problems, and all sorts of things, but I like…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Okay so if anyone is interested I have a snipit of a chapter I’ve been stuck on for a while, honestly it’s probably the unconcious guilt of making my characters suffer XD
So some of you may know Anwyn from the KP Library. But anyway, if anyone is interested in reading it (though it’ll be a little out of context) and could give me some ideas on…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
XD That would definitley be entertaining for me
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@princesachronicle22 heeeey u wouldn’t wanna RP as Zyrin sometime would ya? up to u 😊
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin
Arabella
Ara gazed at the crowd, slowly lowering her arm that was stretched over Asher. Suddenly, a very small girl pushed her way through the crowd.
“Hello! I’m Eddie. It’s nice to meet you. You have a reall…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h @loopylin @mineralizedwriting
SERIN
Where in Depth’s Pools do they keep their healing beds? Serin thought to herself.
Water from the fountain streamed from her hair and onto her skin. The silvery green saliva from the monster had dried near her puncture wounds, and now her muscles clenched and convulsed as the poison started to spread…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️
Lol
Of course!!! <3
@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @gwyndalf-the-wise @whalekeeper @loopylin @anyone-else-who-cares-to-critique
Hey, y’a…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 this is gonna be so great because if Ara mentions November I wonder if he’ll remember that little Redheaded boy who was 14 when he last met him XD XD
@loopylin u wanna go next?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin yea that’s one of the things I don’t know 😅😅😅
I do know what the dryads look like tho, hopefully I got it across well? It’s easy to imagine the females (and the males for me but it might be harder for others cuz I’d have to explain? But hopefully I did ok explaining? Lol)
But sometimes the females wrap their around around them like sk…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin who in Yalls group got hurt again? I couldn’t keep up XD XD
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Elliot’s reply…lol!
😁 Yes. He is sassy and I love him.
Milo
“Alright.” Milo and Feather stepped back inside the castle and made their way back to the room where the rest of them should be waiting. They could hear some talking through the door as they approached.
Cammie
Cammie sat, curled up against the wall, unc…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone Elliot’s reply…lol!
Crosshair
“Oh, I would never imagine it,” Elliot muttered, but didn’t say any more until they were deep in the hallways. Then he spoke up with “So how long have you two been here?”
“Too long.” Crosshair growled. “Actually, from what I can tell, only a standard rotation [24-hour day] or two. This…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Forgot to tag people XD
@freedomwriter76 (Ik u don’t “technically” worldbuild but I still appreciate ur input!) @lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon (btw tell Koshka I said hi!) @esther-c @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin yea they are sorry let me RP! @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76
Arabella
Ara gripped Asher’s hand, giving it a gentle squeeze as the two traversed down the pitch black hall. She sucked in a deep breath, trying to rid herself of the memories that passed by her mind’s eye.
“Arabella…?” Asher’s voice whispered, warbling slightly.…[Read more]
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Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic Magic systems!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
You could not do a language-based magic system and do something with sigils. Basically, symbols carved into the rock would do things.
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