Loopy

@loopylin

I’m glad you think it looks interesting. I love government plot books and write my fair share of them.

@liberty

I’m so glad you like it!!!

Yes, that is a real hymn! One of my very favorite! He only got to the first verse….. there is more to come and it will come at perfect…[Read more]

@loopylin

I haven’t read any backstory snippets for Fel. 🤨

Nah you’re okay, I love teasing too. Take one more snowball, madam. 😜

…

I know at least one person hit me with snow, so I wrote this just to cover all my debts.

Bast set the basket of cookies next to the old man’s armchair. There were surely more chores to do, but there wasn’t…

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@hybridlore @calyhuge @loopylin @theshadow

Okay! Here are my 411 words to your 4 snowballs! By the way, thanks for giving me tons of snowball POWER!!!!! I get to hit 8 people!!!!!

@hybridlore As promised, here is the next installment of the Kingdom Pen story! I can’t wait to write the next part! (*hm*…am I asking to be snowballed? Maybe?)

Anyw…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yeah, same.

@loopylin

Ah, but what happened to Fel?

@loopylin

But I’m happy with that

And that’s exactly why some of my characters are just chill and happy. There’s nothing less deep about having an average backstory. I can think of some characters who are super shallow because the writer thought trauma equals character depth.

@loopylin   @whalekeeper

Pouts.

@ellette-giselle @loopylin

Okay, now it’s a challenge. Post what you wrote, and I can almost certainly top it.

Honestly, even writing down the bare facts of the backstory might be too graphic for people. It’s necessary because the end of the story is a reversal of the beginning, kind of like that flash fiction I posted a couple pages back.

I l…[Read more]

@liberty

Another thing liberty, what is buddy’s negative character traits? I get to hear his good ones, but what is he bad at? What skills shape his character for the worse? What makes him frustrated and causes him anger? And with Sebastien, I heard a little about his flaws, but I need more to work with! Thank you so much for participating…[Read more]

@loopylin :(((((((((((((((((

Okay maybe I’ll post trauma some time. Also you should definitely give us more Fel and Lois. More. More.

@elishavet-pidyon

Aw, I won’t throw snowballs at you then. Truce.

*Whips around* @rae +2 @mineralizedwritings +2 @hybridlore +2 @savannah_grace2009 +2 @calyhuge +2 @loopylin +4

@loopylin

That… Would be difficult. XD

Don’t know I I’m in the fast writers group, but for me, I’m not writing anything serious, just bits of stories that have been in my head for weeks. If this was my “actual” WIP it would take longer.

@loopylin

Well, those almonds sure do taste good. ;]

XD Metaphors are funny when you continue them.

:(((

I caaan’t. All my Lovedream characters are severely traumatized and I’m not just talking ‘his parents died to typhoid’ or whatever.

They manage to function – even Hugo can act very normal, and honestly, good for him. *Pats him too hard on…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ok, here’s my dues.

“Be still, luv.” Her shepherd’s hands were soft from his many years tending sheep. He washed the cuts on her face with a gentleness that brought tears to her eyes.

“Aiche…”

“I know.” He looked away, jaw tight. Ellie swallowed.

“She made me.”

“It will grow back. For now, I am just glad you escaped.” He smoothed…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh gracious. I don’t even know what to write.

Bother.

Shadows drifted above the rafters. Daithí crouched among them, eyes and ears open on the room below.

Wolves. Hideous monsters. They sat around a splintered table with cups of tea and harsh laughter. Let them have their fun. Daithí muttered a curse. His mother would have boxed h…[Read more]

@loopylin

*Runs away flailing my arms* Okay okay I wrote the words!! Just don’t kill me!! *Ducks behind an igloo*

I would post them, but it’s traumatic backstory stuff and there’s no way anyone has a more traumatic scene written on KP, so I politely decline myself. XD

@rae

Whaley inspired it, so credit to her.

Wait how?

@loopylin

It’s a whole lot of adorable nothing. I’m fascinated. If you publish it, I’ll buy it. 🙂

Wait. I was- oof!

*A muffled voice comes from my snow fort*

A counter attack….Yes…

@highscribeofaetherium @loopylin

In the mood for a Chase snippet?

Snap. The tiny sound caught Chase’s attention. He turned, pulling the brim of his ranger hat down so that it blocked his eyes from view. “Come out.”

Kat, knowing she was caught, slowly rose from her poise in the brush. “Hi, Chase,” She greeted him sheepishly.

“W-what do you th-t…

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@loopylin

grrrrr.

@liberty   @freed_and_redeemed

The closer they got to the water, the tighter Marta held to Josef’s hand. “What’s that sound?” she asked, anxiously.

“It’s the waves on the shore,” Josef replied. He led her closer just as a large wave crashed into the sand.

The water swirled around Marta’s legs, and she let out a scream,…

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@jonas @raxforge

I’ll think I’ll add Jenny with Baron.

@loopylin

XD

@loopy @Andrew

Baron (Brutus)—with Felicity’s band, Elderstrand

As Brutus lept to another rooftop, his peripheral vision caught movement. He slightly slowed, seeing a braid and the edge of a tan skirt as someone tried to hide behind a corner. He halted, before leaping down…[Read more]