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@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

Next chapter! We are about two-thirds through The Cost now. (Maybe a little under.) This scene was not in the first draft, so I’m interested to see what you think of it.

Chapter the 20th – The Eraser

@loopylin

Izre

Izre had intended that last part as a mere statement of fact, not a threat, but it seemed the girl had taken it as such. Not that that bothered Izre much.

Ah, yes. A “cat.” That’s what it was. She regarded it dubiously. It didn’t look particularly strong or fearsome. Humans really were quite strange in their choices of…[Read more]

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Izre

Izre cursed silently to herself. It was the same answer the other group had given her, which meant that this girl must not have had anything to do with what was happening. Unless…unless it was all a big conspiracy and they were all in on it together! Izre lashed her tail angrily at the thought, but even she had to admit that…[Read more]

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Maverick

“Thank you,” Maverick adjusted his hat although it was to be forever lopsided, then strided towards the two people. “Did you see interesting sights on your hopefully not treacherous journey?”

@the_lost-journal @loopylin

Ben

Ben looks down at his sword, “Sword, what… oh yes, oops, forgot that was there.” Ben draws his sword and swings it around to prove he is worthy of wielding a sword.  “Now I must be off, who knows what mischief he has gotten into. Toodiloo.”

Ben

A 5′ 10″ automaton who is best friends with Rax. Ben is slender and in some part of him you can see right through him. He is rusty head to foot, and at his side hangs a sword. He carries a big backpack filled with random and useful things.

@loopylin @the_lost-journal

Ben walks up to Felicity and Cyrus, “Excuse me,” his voice sounds like…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

WHY ALL THE DAD JOKES?????

@rae

I stalk this page and I love your art.

@loopylin

I love that soooo much!

@loopylin

Nice work!

@loopylin

Izre

Izre continued on her way, becoming more and more irritated as hall after hall contained no one to question or vent her annoyance on.

Finally, as she turned a corner, she saw a staircase at the end of the next hall. She froze as she heard the sound of someone descending it.

It was a girl, who was wearing a strange pair of…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh okay. Lol. That’s alright! 🙂

That’s cool! I can also give a short description rq.

Maverick Nalvailro: 15 or 16 years old, kinda short for his age. Dark skin with bright green eyes. He’s probably wearing a really tall, asymmetrical top hat and a normal-ish outfit. Sorry, I know normal-ish isn’t descriptive lol.

Navin Nalvailro:…[Read more]

@loopylin

Got it! And nice to meet you!

@loopylin haha that’s cute

@rae That is amazing. I also think Ellette’s advice is very good.

God gave you this gift. I highly doubt He did it just for you to say “This is trash, I don’t like it, I’m useless at it.”

Haven’t you, like, WON THE ART CHALLENGE a couple times?

@loopylin

Sure! The description is a few pages back. I’ll see if I can find the page number.

@loopylin

Sorry, I forgot to ask, (only if you still wanted our characters to interact) where are yours located at the moment? I could try and write one of mine running into them if you were still good with that (not literally running though… I mean, I guess it could be literally depending on what happens. Lol. 😆)

@arcticanimals

Hey there!…[Read more]

@raxforge @keilah-h  @theducktator  @rae   @koshka  @whalekeeper  @loopylin

@loopylin

I loved reading your character scenes.

Thank you, *bowing* thank you *bowing*. I try my hardest. Wait till you meet his friend.

and probably should not be allowed in schools

That is 100% accurate, but he’s like 17 so he kinda needs to… unless he homeschools, but then again, his parents on completely different world… so yeah, he’s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @beth-torres

Debatable 🧐 Alpha dealt a death stab before there was any indication that 231 intended physical harm… a little murderous, if you ask me. It was only after Alpha willingly initiated the stabbing that they started fighting to the death.

Sorry, I’m overthinking it XD

231 was the one who ori…[Read more]

@rae

LOLLLL that’s alright.

@loopylin

Yes pleeeeeease! I don’t know where my charries are rn though. They’re just existing somewhere.

@ellette-giselle

Hello! I don’t believe we have met. It’s nice to meet you! Well, the chaos your bad guys made is wonderful XD. I was considering adding one of my own villains, but I think I’ll wait cause…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yeah, I don’t really know what happened, it’s all a haze.

@ellette-giselle

and it wasn’t murder, it was a fight. And someone died in the fight. That is not murder.

Debatable 🧐 Alpha dealt a death stab before there was any indication that 231 intended physical harm… a little murderous, if you ask me. It was only after Alpha w…[Read more]

@loopylin

I PLEAD INNOCENT ON THE ARSON!!
That is all @raxforge fault!

and it wasn’t murder, it was a fight. And someone died in the fight. That is not murder.

otherwise, you about have it right.