Loopy

@whalekeper

Tyyy

Yeah I want it to take some time so she can have a negative character arc hehe

Also idk if you noticed but Tauren literally told her her pain wouldn’t be worth living/writing about 😭😭 he just doesn’t get that it takes time to process trauma. But he has good intentions of…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad to hear that!

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else

I signed up!!

@loopylin

Zeke?

@hybridlore

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

I love it!! I was definitely surprised, that Amelia and Joseph wanted to adopt him so soon. We didn’t really get to see Sabina’s reaction.

I just caught two typos:

Without a word, Sabina gathered him up in her arms, and Ezra laid his head against her, his eyes closing. Sabina rocked him, humming softly.

I think this is meant to…[Read more]

Look what I found in my drawing files! I completely forgot about this one, drew her probably a year ago. This is some weird concept art but I still like it. XD

@koshka

Thanks for entertaining my vague question! I figured it out.

@mineralizedwritings.

Yayy! <3 Poor Les. She just needs to find the words right now. I like how she needs time to figure it out, because it’s honestly more realistic than reciting your inner conflict easily.

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

Keep in mind there are other digital art programs out there, and there are a lot of different choices. @mineralizedwritings @loopylin and @grcr (I think) also draw digital art.

@whalekeeper

huh. interesting.

I might have to look into that.

Thanks!!

@ellette-giselle

If you purchase the Apple app, it’s a one-time purchase of around $15.

I researched it and decided the best use for it would be on an Apple ipad and Apple pen, which are the expensive part of the deal. I saved up and bought all that for around $400… Yeeeaah, that’s where the money goes. XD

I’m not sure what other devices you…[Read more]

@loopylin

My second cousin’s Great Dane was named Samson.

Bear, Captain, Zeus, Knox.

You could also name the dog after its favorite food, like Cheeseburger.