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@ellette-giselle

I understand that. At the moment, I do have an arc idea which explores the strange peace and yet burden of Christians, but I don’t talk about it much because, while it fits both the AU and real timeline (with only slight changes) I’m not completely happy with it yet.

Also, sorry to burst your bubble, but at the moment, I don’t…[Read more]

@theducktator pffffft the epistle one lol

and the medicine one is so true haha

and yes, I hope there are infinite bookstores in heaven…….

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

Ok, here is the next section.

One night, as Aaron sat studying his Bible in the room he shared with Noah and Darrien, a timid nock came on the door.

“Come in,” said Aaron, without looking up.

The door creaked open and quiet steps pattered across the floor and came to the small table where Aaron sat. A hand tou…

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@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

K, I added anther as well.

One afternoon Aaron and Noah returned from doing a few odd jobs for a friend in exchange for a new pair of boots. When they came in sight of the orphanage, the door crashed open and out tumbled Joseph and several other boys. “Noah! Noah do a trick!” cried Asher.

“A trick?” asked Noah. “…

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@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It looks like you two are the only ones left! I wrote a short scene to fill in the gap left by time passage, and I wondered what y’all thought.

It wasn’t long before Darrien came home with a little boy and girl in tow. They were twins, about nine or ten years old.

Aaron and the rest were in the kitchen talking when D…

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@rae

Wow! This is making me want to read the whole thing!!!

Okay, I do have a thought. As Christians authors  we have a voice, and so when given the chance I think we should use it to point to Christ. Sooo, where is that in your book? Anyone can write a story about finding happiness. Your character is searching for peace and happiness, and…[Read more]

Ok, here is the heraldry. It’s complicated, just to warn you. I wouldn’t even attempt to etch it on the hilt. lol. I can’t find the updated version where I changed the sword on the inside and the edges of the shield to gold. It must have been lost the lasst time my laptop crashed.

@linus-smallprint

Yes, Friedrich does train with a sword. I thought I described it already…. Let me go take a look.

Ok, yes, silver hilted when he’s a prince, and gold hilted with a sapphire settings when he’s a king. I wish I could send a picture of the stile.

HEY!!!!! PICTURES!!!! YAHOOOOOO!!!!

Ok, this would be what I patterned his swo…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

“Imagining alterations” Kinda ups the creepy level in my opinion. It sounds pretty demonic and/or weird spiritual. I mean, saying “casting spells” gives us something to work off of. say “Imagining alterations” and that leaves our imagination to do the rest. I say leave it the way it is.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @anyonewhocares

Okay, I think I’m ready to share my Alpha AU NO. 2 (NO. 1 was about a year ago, and wasn’t well explored)

I will use these abbreviations: Itrt= In the Real Timeline

Itau= In the Alternate Universe

Okay, to get started…

The beginning of how Alpha came into existence is the same itrt…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I know, I just don’t understand why my little brother added my name onto it. Like, what thought linked those two things together. I don’t believe it to be for sake of poetry, because Ez has terrible poetry. His rhyming is really off.

Don’t get me wrong, I love the name (I think it’s cute and I secretly love it when Ez c…[Read more]

@theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr (i think I got everyone)

I guess I’ll start the first RP!

Audrey

I closed my eyes tighter as light tried to force them open. My head throbbed, weighing me to the ground. The crisp, cold feel of stone met my touch as I tried to sit up. I slowly opened my eyes, the blood r…[Read more]

@evelyn-collins Oh I did? LOL I don’t remember that, but ok!

shame you got sick but hey, at least you have free time to learn to write Crosshair’s personality!

also, it’s ok if he’s a little off character, considering we have no idea how he’d react to having a daughter that’s been separated from him for pretty much about her entire existence.

@evelyn-collins ikr?

also here’s a fanfic tip: Wanna learn how to write Crosshair correctly? Learn his mannerisms. Get inside his gray-haired, burn-scarred head. Re-watch Bad Batch, every scene with Crosshair. If you’re allowed to do so, I’m pretty sure you can find YouTube videos that’s like “Bad Batch but only when Crosshair is on screen” or…[Read more]

@evelyn-collins lollll you just can’t make that kinda stuff up can ya?

People mispronounce my name all the time, or they hear it before they read it and then spell it as “Kayla.” I got used to it a long time ago XD

oooh also, am I allowed to ask a question of my own here?

@evelyn-collins yeah I get that, it’s just how it is sometimes…

also, believe it or not, I have been called Eveln in real life face to face with someone, along with just about a hundred other much less accurate names, including Nora… for half a year.

How does someone make that mistake?? LOL

if you have any other questions about your s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint wow I kinda love the altered creation-evolution debate dynamic to include your magic system, that’s cool.

Also, those particular powers you mentioned that are in the books are stuff I’d be perfectly fine with if I saw it in a story. It’s actually the exact kind of thing my brother and I came up with for one of our stories.

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@ellette-giselle

You’re good 🙂

Btw, irl I’m called Ruth (my real name) Ruthie, Ru (roo), Ruee (roo-ee) and Ruee Hamster Hooey (by my little brother and our neighbor’s kid. Don’t ask why he started calling me that! I have no idea!) Then on here I’m called RAE which are my initials, so at this point, call me whatever. As long as I know you mean…[Read more]

@theducktator I haven’t liked or paid attention to the Toy Story series since I was maybe 6, but that is equal parts sad and horrifying.