Loopy

@linus-smallprint

(In other words, is he trying to be disciplined in fighting his worry, but forgetting to be dependant on God to help him (which seems quite likely since he is struggling with doubt itself))

100% Yes.

I know I’m not much of a romance guy, but even I wanted to see this in developed scenes instead of a summary. I want to see t…

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@linus-smallprint

Nah, just call him Alan. That’s his name after all. I mean, people don’t refer to you as “The Canadian” or “The guy with the wired way of measuring fences” or, “The guy with a part time job” lol.

They call you Justin, or Linus. those are your names/nicknames/online-names. but they are still your names.

Just call him Alan.

I…

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A horse stable? MA be a war reenactment at a museum? A fair?

@rae

Okay, thank you! Yay, Mandin is back 😂 That’s totally fine! As long as you can keep writing from that point, you can always come back and change it once you’re done.

@theducktator That was so funny! Great job! I like the Shadow’s idea of her trying to break into a zoo and rescuing some birds, lol. Maybe an amusement park? A concert? A DMV?

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

OK, I’m back. new section, and would really love feedback on this because It’s still in a stage where I would be wil;ling to change or tweak things.

It was a long week of prayer before Aaron spoke to Sabina about the idea of marriage. Sabina was very surprised, but Aaron had never seen her so joyfully since her…

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Here’s one I did for one of my books. This is Even, my pilot. He’s not having a great day at the moment. But I sure love the angle!!!

@linus-smallprint

PS.

Any thoughts on my music styles? lol.

@theducktator

Your first chapter is amazing, it’s really funny and entertaining.

Ok, some ideas. Maybe Linda could go to Paris, or some place in the world. She could go to the zoo and try to free a peacock or a type of bird there. Those are a few off the top of my head, I’ll try to think of some more tomorrow.

I am a little worried I took some of the POVs too far in my imagination, and if I did, I’m sorry. Some of them I interpreted humorously without thinking much about their actual story 😅

@keilah-h

😃

@keilah-h

Don’t worry, I’m not inclined to get gory. It’s basically just gonna be threats.

@whalekeeper

Okay, makes sense.

What does that mean? What does 😃mean?

also 4% is still effectively zero in my mind lol. Going through this assuming they’ll die makes it hurt less when they do XD

@rae

I actually pictured you would have a few pointers XD

I decided this Game realm would know everything about these characters and have everything to neutralize them. So even if Alpha was immune to everything under the sun, this realm will have something to control him. I guess it’s a cheat card, but y’know, I’m not a fair player. :-P…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank yooouuu!! It took me very long to write that. And you never know, each of your characters have roughly a 4% chance of winning.

I’m gonna go draw some fan art for this, be right back lol

Oooh that’s a good idea.

also this is gonna sound super morbid but if there’s gonna be death, then I wouldn’t mind seeing someone fall to Mundy’s…

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Also I’m sorry if this has worried you so much to make this post ❤️❤️ I hope you will feel peace of mind after this.

Ummm I think as long as you’re enjoying yourself and not entertaining any sin in your story, God’s on your side 🙃 God gave you a sense of creativity and you aren’t doing anything wrong by using it. I also believe it’s fine to tell a story just for the fun of it. God also created us to be perceptive, social beings who want to have fun togethe…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.
other then that, no complaints.
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@mineralizedwritings

ack!! My old nemeses— facial hair! I can never do it right! It always ends up looking like charcoal smears.

I’ll try, but I’m gonna murder this fella’s face!

yeah, we’ve been doing two weeks.

@theshadow

well, I don’t think this is going to be a one-size-fits-all-easy-answer. However, I’m willing to share what I do.

so, I get said idea wether it be plot, character, or scene. From there I write it down in a special journal specifically for this purpose. Then, I pray about it. I ask God to guide me and speak through my writing. I ask…[Read more]