Loopy

@esther-c

Thank you sm!

What was the biblical Pharaoh’s fatal flaw?

He was in de-Nile. *ba-dum tssh*

@loopylin

He’s the patron angel of childhood, both good and bad I guess 👀

@anyone

if anyone wants to meet Alpha, let me know. I’m gonna be taking him shopping for a tux after my next rp with him.

@whalekeeper

I’m not sure, actually now that I think about it.

Library?

libraries are fun.

I would take Nar dress shopping, but I have a plan with that…which involves Alpha and rn, I don’t want her to see him.

@freed_and_redeemed

That is so cool that he would do that for you! Your family must be quite invested in your writing!!!

@loopylin

Gasp, I know someone with two dogs named Winnifred and Watson.

@rae Soooo is there something specific you want to do?

@linus-smallprint

Hey, I’m afraid I won’t be able to share the full book in one piece. I don’t trust Reedsy and I can’t find any other way unless I’m missing a place where KP lets you attach files.

So, if there are some of (or all of) the questions you can’t answer because of that then that’s okay.

@rae

I will figure it out soon.

@koshka @loopylin @ellette-giselle

Marcel

After floating to their classroom, the children begged Marcel to stay for snacktime. Ms. Charles was more than happy to oblige them, and the boy crouched upon one of the lily pads, chewing absently on a graham cracker.

The students from the basement stopped by, and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle you’re very welcome!!

@keilah-h

Thank you so much!

@freed_and_redeemed wowwww

that was great!! I’m really looking forward to the next book!!

@theducktator nahhh I mean like look at my forum signature, we are no stranger to killing things here.

ALEXANDER THE GRAPE BRUHHHHHH

that sounds like a Veggietales kind of story ngl

I don’t knw if you can join my group because @theducktator would have to also agree on letting you join, but honestly, the more the merrier in the castle!

@loopylin You can totally join!!

Were the characters believable?

I think they were!

Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?

Seemed pretty individual to me.

What would you say was the message of the story?

What would you say my world view was?

Hmmmm…. I’m terrible with deducing messages and intentions, so I can’t really tell, but that’s my fault, not…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yeah I saw them! Answering them in a sec!

@koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin

Rory

Rory trailed behind Leo and the girls, lost in his own whirlwind of thoughts. He finally noticed they had come to a stop and looked up.

They had come to an open door covered with large paper frogs. Inside a chorus of children were working their way through a simple rhyme. A middle-aged woman was…[Read more]