Loopy

@savannah_grace2009 yay!

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

Cracking Ace!

@savannah_grace2009 yep!

Got any more of your story yet?

I haven’t been checking, sorry.

@keilah-h

aw yesss

@ellette-giselle I love it. You can use British and Aussie expressions around me whenever you want!

@savannah_grace2009 yeahh!! it’s always great to have that sense of community.

@whalekeeper

That’s alright, no worries. I get that a lot.

It;s not a bad thing! I love interesting people.

(I hope you didn’t take that wrong. when people say that to me it’s always in a not nice way. Sorry if I came across like that!)

@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@keilah-h

I love the word cricky, and it was the first thing that came to mind. I was going to substitute it with a more American option, but then realized you would be someone who could appreciate a good British/Australian exclamation, so I left it.

A little if both I would say.

@whalekeeper lol

@ellette-giselle I’m glad.

And I’m over here wondering if your cry of “crikey!” was just the first thing that came to mind or if you specifically chose it cause you thought I’d get a kick out of it.

If the second is the case, your presumption was correct.

If it’s the first and I’m over thinking it, ignore that.

@savannah_grace2009

I also just want to know that people are reading it, because it’s hard to write when you don’t know if people even care or are interested, if that makes sense. When I know people are reading it, it gives me so much more motivation!!

yessss this happens to me too. The I worked on for over half of 2024 and was the first fan…[Read more]

@liberty

Ah, so it is.

I forgot they had the same name! lol.

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

@rae awww! Baron trying to play with the girls was so cute!!

also I agree with Ellette’s suggestion.

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@liberty

Yeah, it must be the fact that I’m breaking a story trope where the wild animals always attack.

Yep! This is a German/Roman hybrid. The German just hasn’t come out much until now.

And…you created another Ernst?

Sorry?

@liberty

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Julian, run!”

Leon is still trying to gather his thoughts and figure out what Julian just jumped into…. lol.

Got that about the river.

Haha! I’ve had others complai…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Hmm, I will remember to choose a fork for a weapon next time someone throws me into a tournament.