Loopy

@ellette-giselle

Poor Highscribe. What did you do to her?

@ellette-giselle

Leon is definitely more confident and the leader. It feels like Julian looks to him and gets more concerned about things. And Julian likes to make quips. That was just what I think I noticed from this chapter.

@liberty @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore

Ok! So I’m not posting this as soon as I wanted, lol, but this is the almost final draft and I’d like your thoughts again if y’all are willing.

I didn’t change any of the tenses or add words because I wanted it to sound very “in the moment” if that makes sense. I did add a couple of things that hopefu…[Read more]

@koshka

Oh my goodness. Love it.

@hybridlore

That title was given to me by a very distressed Highscribe and I bare it proudly.

@hybridlore

Okay I can change that. It won’t do anything to the plot.

Lol 😂😂 I like Roland

haha, me too.

Poor Leon. He is now stuck with two impulsive companions.

Also, I’m starting to see the personality differences between Julian and Leon and I love them 😍

ME TOO!!!!!

Just out of curiosity and to see if I’m getting everything across, w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He’s my favorite so I want him to die.

No wonder you kill off so many characters. 😅

🖋️Official KP Psychopath✒️

Lolol

@ellette-giselle

Good section!

Roland, I in no way want to go against God’s will, but are you sure?” Leon asked.

Roland nodded.

When I read this, I thought that maybe Leon and Julian should have prayed about it before letting him come with them.

Roland shook his head in disgust. “I have a mind to smash it,” he muttered.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa,” Le…

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@hybridlore

no, it makes perfect sense.

He’s an awesome character and I wanna see him more.

He’s my favorite so I want him to die.

@ellette-giselle

That’s not his only chapter, just the next one when he appears… I think.

He also needs to die.

That sounds contradictory, lol.

@hybridlore

WHAT! NO!! A character like Alec needs a lot more spotlight!!!

He also needs to die.

I WANNA READ CHAPTER 13!!

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!! I’m glad it’s working, I honestly don’t even know what I did lol. Warrain is based a lot on Overwatch, which I’ve played a lot before, so maybe it’s coming from experience and that’s how. (It’s still a very different game though.)

I sure like Cole.

When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy whimper*

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

Sorry I’m late. Busy today. But, I think it’s a little longer than normal. 🙂

“Thank you so much for the meal, Liesl. It was wonderful,” Julian said.

Liesl smiled. “I’m glad you liked it.”

“So, what are we doing today?” Roland asked. A…

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@hybridlore

great progress!!!

I love this chapter! You really suck me into the game planning which is great because I normally find scenes like this super boring in books. It’s crazy but whatever you did has made it so that I can completely picture the game!!

I sure like Cole.

When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy…[Read more]

@raxforge

Lolll, funny, but legit too

@koshka Sylph is very cute, by the way. I want to know how he dances.

I seriously need to update the foreign lit/etc. class, since it’s my character teaching the class. Posting this reminder for myself, so maybe I get it written tonight.

@elishavet-pidyon Umm… I think I just tried to tag you by your CWW name…? 😅

@whalekeeper

Great topic!

I don’t know, I’m sure they affect my writing a lot more than I realize. The one that has the most is obviously reading but I don’t know if that counts. XD

A lot of my projects for a while had something to do with space and flying starships, because I read Skyward by Brandon Sanderson and loved it. I guess that’s an…[Read more]

@keilah-h

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

love the cake!!!!