Loopy

@freed_and_redeemed

You’re killing me with that picture of Jezyk!

Ugh.

I’m not crying.

Nope.

Totally Not.

@ellette-giselle THANK YOU!!

I’m excited to write them more in later books, hehe

@freed_and_redeemed

LOVE IT!!!

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @rae @grcr @esther-c @theducktator @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-lol

Violet Iris resistance group!!

(not all of the characters on this board are shown or even mentioned in Freedom’s Fire…shhh…that’s for later books🫢🤫🤭)

@whalekeeper

Sure, go ahead and ask. This is still just in it’s first draft.

I have a couple other scenes with explanation so a may have already covered the questions you’re going to ask, but shoot anyways.

@ellette-giselle

So I like the idea of a marriage themed dystopia, but I do have some questions because some of this doesn’t make sense and could be cleared up. Can I ask a few things?

@whalekeeper @keilah-h

Yes, this is the “marriage one”

Okay, let me find that scene where Ethan talks to his dad all about it. The scene happened before the one with Ethan and Jonas.

That night, Ethan was unable to sleep. Despite being so tired he was ready to drop, his mind refused to let him rest, and thoughts ran dizzying circles in his…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Cool, I listened to it while writing.

I’m still tinkering away at this! but casually. And I actually have to write future scenes before posting the next bit because of all the plot threads, deaths, etc etc etc.

Actually I haven’t seen any story use objectification as the protagonist’s flaw, that would be kind of cool. Lots of rough growth, but cool.

@ellette-giselle

Ohh *sneaks in* this is the marriage story right? If you post a section where the characters explain why marriage is banned versus discouraged, I’d like to read it. I liked the first scene you shared too.

Also I had to meme-ify this 😅

But no one’s perfect at the beginning of a book, it’s a good story idea to see someone grow…[Read more]

@grcr

Thank you!

@grcr You’re welcome! 💜 The uniform looks really good!!

@ellette-giselle You’re welcome! 💜

Man, that drawing makes me tear up when I think about him.

i miss him so much😭😭

@the_lost-journal

wow congrats!

Thank you!💜

Hey sorry I didn’t say more, I replied late and I had to go to bed. 😅 Anyway it’s nice to meet you!

Totally understand! No need to apologize, haha XD It’s nice to meet you too!!

Cool, another homeschooler! I used to be homeschooled but now I’m in high school. (my moms choice)

Ah, I see. Haha, I’ve been…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

REALLY! Thank you so much!

Oh I’m so glad! That’s always how I imagined him, so I was hoping it’s how you did as well. Man, that drawing makes me tear up when I think about him.

@theducktator GIRLLLLL😂😂🤣😆

You just made my day😭😭

AHHH I LOVE ALL OF THE FREEDOM’S FIRE MEMES!!!!

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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

Poor Riker😅

@grcr

😍

I love his hair!! The shading and colors are really good and the uniform is so accurate!

@ellette-giselle

🤩🤩

He looks so sweet and gentle. I love the coloring and the small details on his uniform! The expression is so fitting and he looks so good😭😭

@mineralizedwritings

🤩😂

That smile!! XD I love his hair and the side profile,…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

no prob.

@freed_and_redeemed

I think everyone sent in their drawings.

You ready to judge them?

FINALLY!