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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness!!! This was so, so good! I really loved this, and the time flips were amazing! I love how you did the different periods, yet had them flow together so well that at times it almost felt like the same story! Oh this was amazing. The descriptions you use were perfect and I could really picture everything! Well done!
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TheShadow started the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, I have another religion related question. This is a basic and age old one, but still one a lot of people (myself included) struggle with. Why did God give us free will? Of course, there’s the answer that He did it so we could freely choose to love Him back because real love doesn’t coerce or force to love back. But then, why would God eve…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Ok, then it should be alright.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Ooh, this looks interesting. I will read it soon.
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay! Just wanted to make sure you knew. 🙃
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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
The Mill soundtrack by Samuel Sim. It’s amazing.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Let’s try that again. @highscribeofaetherium
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@theshadow Yes, fifty words per snowball. 😉
@esther-c LOL.
@everyone (@highscribeofaetherium) I can also take snowballs now that my stock is all out . . .
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Yeah, I noticed, lol. I don’t really care too much, tbh. I mean, I trust y’all, and most KP stalkers end up as members anyway. 😂 Thanks for letting me know tho! 😊
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hybridlore replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Also, you forgot to blur out your last name. 😬 Unless you meant to leave it in there, I just know you had blurred it out before when posting the cover. But it might not let you edit anymore.
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay, it’s out!! 😁
Hmm… @kyronthearcanin, @keilah-h, @jonas, and @liberty might also be interested.
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh yes, please throw some snowballs at me. I have been much too lazy with my writing lately. 💀 I need a good kick in the pants. 🥾😂
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I was too lazy to find the right emojis 😂😂
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Got meself me 100 words.
Now snowballs atttt…. @liberty @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Welp… I wrote a short story! XD
If you have the time, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it before I show it to friends and family. (It’s kinda long, I apologize, lol. It’s under 11k.)
Tagging some folks just in case you’re interested, but don’t feel obligated to read it. :))
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 [Read more]
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Esther started the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago

Open Eyes
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Amos wiped sweat off his brow with the back of his hand. He pressed against the wall of the synagogue, the stone cooling his hot skin. The voice of the priest droned on through the windows. “But you, O Bethlehem Ephrathah, who are too little to be among the clans of Judah, from you shall come forth for me one who is to be ruler in I…[Read more] -
TheShadow replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
How many words do I have to write? Fifty?
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Esther replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
We also have a new tradition where we eat a different cuisine for dinner on the three(?) nights leading up to Christmas. Like Mexican, Chinese, pizza, and then on Christmas Eve we eat finger foods so there aren’t a lot of leftovers to leave room in the fridge for left over Christmas dinner. 😋
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