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@linus-smallprint

I dunno. I like that movie a lot, but it never came to mind while I wrote this scene.

These one sentence time skips aren’t bad, I just have a habit of missing them and then getting confused. Bad habit, that.  The whole escape happened so fast and I kept missing things that I had no idea why they were suddenly in the mo…

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
February 16th
The Empire

Loosing Aelic has been the most heartbreaking thing I have experienced since Adrian’s death. Aelic was such a dear brother, and we all love…

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@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone
If you could hypothetically ask S. D. Smith a question, what would it be?

That does it. I’m going to work on this project as hard as I can after I finish the thesis abstract.

@theducktator

I’m not sure how I feel about what you said, because one of the plot points includes making a brave phone call.

…This is a sign.

@the_lost-journal

“We should try hunting together. I think it be interesting to see how we would act in the other person’s area or something. I don’t know!”

hey, next time you find yourself in one of the kp roleplays we could try to get them together!

(speaking as myself, not one of the characters lol)

“Nice! So, what is your kill count?! j…

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@ellette-giselle I can see that.

@keilah-h

Yes! Agreed.

At least Martin made the right choice. I would argue his death scene was the most frightening one I’ve written.

@ellette-giselle wow….interesting section! I feel a bit bad for the one who believed right before the priest slashed his throat. But I agree with Leon, the sadness is tempered by the fact that they are in the presence of God Himself now.

I’ll stop info dumping on the roleplay forum now.

since I explained Crosshair’s situation though I’ll explain his:

he was just betrayed by his own family. He was adopted, although his adoptive parents are dead, and when he met his biological parents they were literally just like “nope” and ditched him within like an hour, leaving him and the rest of his team alone in a broken down underwater…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

haha!!!

Oh yes, absolutely.

@whalekeeper they really are the GOATs.

Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD

LOL!

it’d be weirder if you did have an emotional connection to him with no prior knowledge of what’s going on.

@ellette-giselle

Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.

Oh don’t get me wrong, I still love it.

And neither of the two guys have met. 😂

And that’s when things get fun, when characters are technically connected but they haven’t met yet

@whalekeeper

Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.

In the first one, all three end up frequenting the same cafe at different times, and only a few readers pick that up because I never state the name, but I describe the surroundings the same. Things like that.

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@trailblazer I remember the Narnia quote!

Ikr? Awesome

ok but looking at it even closer you can see little shockwaves from the bullets right before they strike his belly/chest. That’s DETAILED.

Graphic novel artists are the goat, for real. I don’t know how they do it.

@keilah-h

my brain: he just got SHOT and is BLEEDING OUT IN A FLOODING UNDERWATER FACILITY and you’re commenting on the LINEWORK????

Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD