Loopy

@linus-smallprint

 

I’ve encountered Karl’s in my day. Guys who can quote scripture up and down, but live in complete lies, yet they try to make it look like you’re the enemy.

@linus-smallprint

Yes, that was the Stiens

 

Hmm, interesting that you should say that………….  I agree that the villain on the inside is a fun twist. I like this too.

@theducktator

This is Squooshy.

His name is quite accurate.

We do not know what he is made of. He may or may not be radioactive. [not in reality lol]

He is friends with a small blue-tinted slinky. No one has the heart to tell him it’s a slinky and thus doesn’t have feelings.

@the_lost-journal

 

Yes, I would die for them.

@the_lost-journal

 

now, living for them, I would do. The not-courage thing only extends to dying. All those other things, maybe, but I wouldn’t exactly know if I were doing it for my family, for myself, for someone else, if you know what I mean…?

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

 

NEXT SECTION!!!

(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)

Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…

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I never know what to rp

@loopylin

Chase

Chase’s eyes wandered to the puppy. Such a little thing. He’s almost smaller than the wolf pups. Chase looked up at Felicity, actually meeting her eyes, his own eyes remaining green. “W-want t-to go?” He pointed out the window at the puppy.

I’ll start a post somewhere on CEW for KPers. I’d like to know who wants to join!

Additionally we should tag some more people so they are aware of this. I can explain anything people need to know.

@koshka @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @stephie @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision (did I get that tag…[Read more]

Quickly popping in to say Crazy Editing Week starts tomorrow! Anyone who hasn’t thought or heard about it yet, just letting you know.

@whalekeeper hmmm, you make good points.

 

 

@loopylin wow, this is gonna be hard. I might take it though.

 

@theducktator yeah, KOTLC….really straddles the line of “This is amazing” and “This completely stinks” when it comes to writing and plot. The worldbuilding, or at least most of it, is awesome though.

That sounds horrible and selfish, and I’m so sorry, but I really didn’t intend it to be.

@the_lost-journal I wanna say yes, and if it really came down to that I might.

 

but at the same time, I have a much, much stronger aversion to death than most people I know. For example, i live in Florida (not saying where specifically for safety reasons), and there are LOTS of thunderstorms in many places in the state. If I so much as see a…[Read more]

@koshka

You are very welcome.

 

And remember…. I know where you live now…. I will hunt you down and I will find you if you do not post more soon.

@koshka

YAY!!!!!

 

Oh wow!!!

I love this!!!

 

Okay, two things I noticed.

One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.

 

two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….

Brin and Brinni are the same person.

 

Krazsimir and Kras are the same….

 

who is Vrati?

 

Is he a third character?

 

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@hybridlore

 

You got the section from today I’m assuming….

Or did you write that in reply to what I said yesterday?

@koshka that scene was awesome!!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhhh! Now I remember him! My bad—I thought Leon had recognized him.

@freed_and_redeemed   @hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty   @linus-smallprint

 

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Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..

The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.

“Ho…

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