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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.
Chapter 27
Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️
OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTONIt’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn
It almost made me cry but…
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Esther replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 1 month ago
Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you!!!!
You are getting so much better at guys and girls!
I’m glad you think that! Been practicing a bit.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
Wow!! You are getting so much better at guys and girls! I can totally tell which is the girl. This looks really good!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
I have art, finally! Lol

Chell from the Portal games as she appears in my stories. Also, her brother, a fan character of mine. You might remember him if you’ve seen the Hero Forge image I posted a little while back. His name’s Alex, but he’s referred to by his middle name, Jonathan, because there’s another character that goes by his first n…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.
lol that’s cool.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Lol
thanks! That one isn’t out yet, but I do have some e that are published and for sale if you would ever be interested. 🙃
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@grcr wowwww that looks awesome!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
OH MY WORD!!!!
Looking at it I suddenly realized how many of them I asked you to draw!!!! I can’t believe you pulled that off! My limit is about three people per picture and then I die. XD
THEY LOOK SO GOOD!!
Put it this way, I looked at it and new exactly who each one was, so that was brilliant! Oh man, I can’t stop laughing…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Haha!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
I had a consultation with my doctor yesterday since my bloodwork results finally came in. I have lymes AGAIN. It came as a little bit of a surprise, since I’ve not found many ticks on me this year, but ticks are sneaky things. *Sigh* so here I go, going on a month of antibiotics in SUMMER. Not looking forward to it, as I do rowing/crew, and I have…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
hmmm. What do you think of Me just removing the last paragraph completely? Would that be enough?
yes, I designed all of it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
The cover looks really cool! Who designed the image? Was that you?
I wanted to add that the description on the back looked good, but the last paragraph didn’t give us much hope, if that makes sense. Most of the time in descriptions like that you’ll see something that leaves the reader guessing whether or not something is goi…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol
I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore
I made some edits on the cover after some of the feedback I got.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Lol, my characters are pretty real to me, and I guessed yours were to you. lololol.
You should totally try that!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll
Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol
Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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