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I’ll start a post somewhere on CEW for KPers. I’d like to know who wants to join!

Additionally we should tag some more people so they are aware of this. I can explain anything people need to know.

@koshka @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @stephie @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision (did I get that tag…[Read more]

Quickly popping in to say Crazy Editing Week starts tomorrow! Anyone who hasn’t thought or heard about it yet, just letting you know.

@whalekeeper hmmm, you make good points.

 

 

@loopylin wow, this is gonna be hard. I might take it though.

 

@theducktator yeah, KOTLC….really straddles the line of “This is amazing” and “This completely stinks” when it comes to writing and plot. The worldbuilding, or at least most of it, is awesome though.

That sounds horrible and selfish, and I’m so sorry, but I really didn’t intend it to be.

@the_lost-journal I wanna say yes, and if it really came down to that I might.

 

but at the same time, I have a much, much stronger aversion to death than most people I know. For example, i live in Florida (not saying where specifically for safety reasons), and there are LOTS of thunderstorms in many places in the state. If I so much as see a…[Read more]

@koshka

You are very welcome.

 

And remember…. I know where you live now…. I will hunt you down and I will find you if you do not post more soon.

@koshka

YAY!!!!!

 

Oh wow!!!

I love this!!!

 

Okay, two things I noticed.

One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.

 

two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….

Brin and Brinni are the same person.

 

Krazsimir and Kras are the same….

 

who is Vrati?

 

Is he a third character?

 

If so, could…[Read more]

@hybridlore

 

You got the section from today I’m assuming….

Or did you write that in reply to what I said yesterday?

@koshka that scene was awesome!!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhhh! Now I remember him! My bad—I thought Leon had recognized him.

@freed_and_redeemed   @hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty   @linus-smallprint

 

NEXT SECTION

Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..

The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.

“Ho…

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@the_lost-journal

Of course. I’m thankful God could use me to encourage you in any way. He will help you, if you but ask.

 

Here’s the full verse and reference.

 

No trial has overtaken you that is not faced by others. And God is faithful: He will not let you be tried beyond what you are able to bear, but with the trial will also provide a…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Well hey, God has made you this age at this time for a reason. The Devil would love for this year to be a complete and total wreck, but the good thing is, you serve a King who is far higher than any prince of darkness. Pray for strength, get out your Bible and read, (psalms are a great place to go when you’re having a hard time)…[Read more]

Interesting how he seems to have a connection to the other characters. I do agree his name blends in with the others’ but that’s not a bad thing, nor do you need to change it, that’s just me failing to pay attention lol

@keilah-h

as a character

@ellette-giselle okay! That makes enough sense for me.

 

Andreas as a name or Andreas as a character?

@keilah-h

it’s an alternate Europe. If that makes sense.

yeah.  That was a roller coaster chapter. Any thoughts on Andreas?

Oooo! I’ll have to listen to the song!

@linus-smallprint

Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
Naming a character is not a simple thing. 😂

 

@ellette-giselle

It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.

I’m late but tell her happy birthday!

@linus-smallprint yeah, it’s just a first draft, those are never, ever perfect. Some can get close to how the end story is, but there’s inevitably gonna have to be at least one scene you cut, one set of dialogue you rework, one characters whose role changes, etc.