Loopy

@hybridlore

Okay, I see what you mean. Eric was just teasing when he was being formal.

I’m envisioning a much larger cut. As I said, a “gash”And actually, depending on where the cut is, you can bleed out.Maybe not from something like that, though. That might be overdoing it. This is my first draft of this section. 😉

@ellette-giselle

Overall, it was pretty good. Some of the dialogue towards the end felt a tiny bit clunky, though.

Very well,”” Eric sighed. “I shall bare the displays of emotion for tonight, but by tomorrow hugs will be limited to once a month.”

This is funny, but it sounds old-fashioned all of a sudden. Is Eric just teasing? Does he lapse i…[Read more]

@hybridlore

So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?

@rae @raxforge I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already, but I didn’t want to say anything in case it was completely wrong. That’s cute though. 🥲💕

@hybridlore

Okay, that’s reasonable.

You win.

@ellette-giselle

1. It gives the reader more hope in a happy ending.

2. It’s more interesting because you play on the past events of the book to make readers think Asher and Eric will die, but then defy the stereotype, keeping them on their toes.

3. It saves Asher and Eric. 🤗

@hybridlore

No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?

@ellette-giselle

YES! Much better. Thanks so so much!

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

@theducktator

How did you not know that?

lol.

It was pretty obvious. lol.

@whalekeeper

 

Do you wait to figure out the psychology of the character during the writing, or do you graph that too?

Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..

(Sorry, I don’t really do technical names. I just do whatever I’m going to do. lol. If that makes sense.)

@raxforge @theducktator

Yay! An excuse to talk about Andrew!!!!!!!

1. He’s really really really adorable, and I will not hear otherwise!
2. He has the best smile EVER, EVER
3. He likes nicknames apparently (really adorable)
4. He’s the most gentlemanly guy you’ll ever meet
5. He thinks his jokes are stupid when they’re actually hilarious (I just…

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Oh whoops, never mind, I realized what “anduth” meant seconds after posting haha

@theducktator lollll when did they tell you about that?

did they tell everyone and I missed it or were you spying on my rather embarrassing conversation in the fanfic forum about him beating out Sniper as RAE’s top Australian?

XD or maybe you guys know each other in real life, idk.

here is “Huntress and Scout but they’re warrior cats” because I was bored and I love warrior cats.

This is only Huntress/Scout’s and Sniper’s parents. I was gonna do more but it was so much work looking through my characters and deciding who was related to who……

If you’re familiar with Warriors lore, you probably noticed that Snipersight’s…[Read more]

@anyone who cares

Ever made a family tree for your characters? I’m doing it right now.

It won’t save cause I’m not signed in to the website I’m doing it on but hey, at least I can screenshot it.

My warrior cats family trees have ridiculous connections lol

@loopylin

My chart is still in the works, but it includes the same nine types he discusses, I just rearrange a few things and summarize it quicker so I can glance at it for reference. And I’m constantly adding other things, stuff like the Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs, other coping mechanisms/corresponding fears I’ve noticed in real life, etc.…[Read more]

@loopylin

*Insert heavenly choir singing*

That’s my DUUUUUUDE, I listen to his videos every time they come out! He saved me from eternal confusion and I understand so much more than before. The 9 types videos he’s making are especially helpful. I definitely don’t agree with everything, and yeah he can make some crude jokes, but his method is de…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I’m good! Honestly I had no idea it’s been this long, I guess time passes faster the older you get. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Hey, sorry it took a minute.

You’re good

Oh it depends. Sometimes I only have 4 or so points, and sometimes it’s close to 16. It just all depends on what points I know I need/want to hit.

Right, you just outline a…[Read more]

@liberty

Ok! Thanks for the offer! 🤗