Loopy

@whalekeeper

The official KP call is next Saturday, not today!

I woke up sick so I might not make it

@ellette-giselle

Leon!!!! Yes!!!

Great section. He must have been really famous…

I want them to meet up with the boy he set free. 🥺

and Leon takes the plunge.

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NEXT SECTION!!!

 

“Oh, it is good to be back!” Rolf exclaimed as he reclined with the others about the fire.

“How is your village?” Johannes asked as he leaned forward to stoke the blaze.

“It is doing well. The winter was a hard one and took some of…

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@rae

Great section!! 💕

@liberty

 

Ooh…we’re getting to see a little bit of Leon’s past!

YES!

Any thoughts on that?

No, they moved into the University for the winter. I mentioned it at one point, but you may have missed it. 😉

@liberty

I LOVE IT!!!

So excited!

@stephie

absulutly.

It just really matters how you go about saying that. If we are to speak truth and proclaim Jesus, that means we need to discredit false gods. God is not One among many. There is only ONE.

But yeah, it depends on how you go about doing so and if you’re antagonistic about it or do it in a loving and kind way. And again,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

🤣🤣

Also, I’m so sorry I haven’t been reading! Life has been WILD!

@esther-c

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you want some ideas or need a brainstorming partner just lmk!

I will!!! TYSM!!! 🙃

Yes I totally get it!! You definitely don’t have to go through and try to fix everything in the first draft 🥴

ahhhh hahaha yeah, I’d definitely get in trouble with @ellette-giselle if I did that…. (jk jk h…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

Glad I was able to help!!!!!

I do love your dialogue though…you’re so talented in that area!!! Just maybe breaking it up would help A LOT. Because too much o…[Read more]

@stephie

I feel like it totally depends on the situation.

Though, at least for me, something doesn’t feel right about saying “your religion is wrong and false.” Because that tends to get people defensive and push them away from Jesus. I feel way more comfortable with saying “I believe that there is only one God….(etc…)” and just sharing what…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

@grcr

Mmm. If that’s how other books do it, I guess it could work. I looked it up and some people say to extend the vowels and smooth con…

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@savannah_grace2009

Mmmm…that does make sense, I’m just not sure how to do that.

Instead of “hope”, my characters are trying to fix their problems themselves. Which might be a “false hope”, but I don’t really see it as hope. I understand what you mean, I’m just not exactly sure how to do that.

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you…[Read more]

@liberty

The blurb looks great! Very intriguing.

@whalekeeper

I use Pinterest or simply type what I want into a search engine and click “Images”.

@liberty ooooh I love those kinds of stories!

@ellette-giselle thanks!

@whalekeeper lol yeah

also tbh I mostly use references of the actual character I’m drawing. I just yoink ‘em off google images (obviously with the safe search function on)

@whalekeeper

WOW!! Those are awesome!

I don’t use references really. Unless it’s for outfits……….

@keilah-h

Nice!! I like it!