Loopy

@koshka

Ooops! 😂

Wow, I have no idea what was even going on. I think Leo and Rory were having “brother time” 😄

Rory

Rory looked up quickly. “I’ll come with you right now!” He scrambled up. “That is, I’ll come with you now… if you would like me to… if your orders are to do so… sir… Leo.”

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@theducktator

Whattttt

That’s crazyyyy!

@loopylin

Chase

Soda. That was the same stuff that Marcel had gotten him at that shop. Chase himself had gotten some for Sef. He kind of liked soda.

He nodded.

sorry, it’s short

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!

The first thing he knew was the pain. He couldn’t remember having ever been in such terrible pain. Then he felt that he was lying on something softer than the ground, and someone was bathing his back with cool water.

“Will he be alright?” a…

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@elishavet-pidyon

Show this to Viktor please.

@whalekeeper

Waaaiiit… I think I know which vending machine this is. XD

I love that. 😂

(It is 9:30 at night where I’m at and I’m doing silly things on KP again…..)

@theshadow no worries mate! (Read that in Sniper’s voice XD)

I enjoy being tagged anyway. (Whether you read that in his voice or however you imagine my voice to sound is up to you.)

@esther-c (why didn’t I take you before, you literally write contemporary!!)

First of all, make sure you’re reading contemporary!!! Especially within the little genres that you want to focus on.

Ooh, okay that’s a good idea. I’ll try that, do you have any book suggestions?

I previously read a YA novel that took place in the 80s and am current…

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@trailblazer

Hm, okay I’ll take those into account. I would share details about the stories in mind but they’re both in the very, very early stages of development (aka I have one or two ideas for each and that’s about it 😅).

So far, for the first one I want it to be set in the summer or fall, and be about two high schoolers sending paper airpl…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Great, I’ll read it tomorrow and let you know what I think of it.

@linus-smallprint

Got it, thanks for letting me know.

@loopylin

“I know about a broken vending machine nearby that you can get free drinks out of,”

Waaaiiit… I think I know which vending machine this is. XD

@hybridlore

Yeah, I had considered it…. but they wouldn’t work together.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Yeah, that makes sense. I’ve read the Ilyon Chronicles, which kind of has a similar vibe to your story’s time period and world, and one of the side characters (Christian) married a former prostitute after she became a believer. So, maybe it kind of reminded me of that, I don’t know.

@keilah-h

well good.

@ellette-giselle exactly what I thought too tbh

@keilah-h    @hybridlore

Exactly. She is not a love interest.

Also, another reason her and julian interacting  a lot wouldn’t be a good idea is because she has not had good involvment with men so she is really, really raw in that area and needs extra space.

@the_lost-journal don’t worry, we pay attention to you!

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle honestly I didn’t see her as a love interest for him. It just didn’t make sense to me. So yeah, having a bunch of scenes of them interacting and then saying “they’re not meant to be a thing” would be weird.