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@the_lost-journal

Well hey, God has made you this age at this time for a reason. The Devil would love for this year to be a complete and total wreck, but the good thing is, you serve a King who is far higher than any prince of darkness. Pray for strength, get out your Bible and read, (psalms are a great place to go when you’re having a hard time)…[Read more]

Interesting how he seems to have a connection to the other characters. I do agree his name blends in with the others’ but that’s not a bad thing, nor do you need to change it, that’s just me failing to pay attention lol

@keilah-h

as a character

@ellette-giselle okay! That makes enough sense for me.

Andreas as a name or Andreas as a character?

@keilah-h

it’s an alternate Europe. If that makes sense.

yeah.  That was a roller coaster chapter. Any thoughts on Andreas?

Oooo! I’ll have to listen to the song!

@linus-smallprint

Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
Naming a character is not a simple thing. 😂

@ellette-giselle

It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.

I’m late but tell her happy birthday!

@linus-smallprint yeah, it’s just a first draft, those are never, ever perfect. Some can get close to how the end story is, but there’s inevitably gonna have to be at least one scene you cut, one set of dialogue you rework, one characters whose role changes, etc.

also I had video game soundtracks on in the background while I was doing schoolwork and this one decided to come on right as I started reading and hit the part when they discover the ruined university…..

…one of like three or four orchestral songs in that entire playlist, and oddly fitting too. Funny how that always happens. No matter what…[Read more]

Finished it! That was a rollercoaster, between confronting a false teacher and the destruction of the university. The plot thickens.

Basically my question is more of “Is this supposed to be a hypothetical eighth continent or small island somewhere in the world, or does this Earth have completely different continents, and the biblical places exist in different configurations?”

Sorry for such a weird question, and sorry if I’ve asked something similar before, but I just…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I see. But is there a Europe somewhere else (nearby?), or does the island-continent in your map completely replace it?

As in, was the “Rome” referred to in the book of Romans what eventually became the Empire, or is it a different place in a different part of the world, and the two have similar cultures either just because…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

True, bit it sort of fit him. Now I’m not sure which name to use……

@linus-smallprint

Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*

Okay fine, I’ll see what I can do….

@linus-smallprint

They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.

And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.

Ah yes, “I”

 

Does that make sense?

Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.

I was confused through these paragraphs.…

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@hybridlore

Odd, I didn’t get tagged when you commented.

Good. I’m glad the timing is right.

yes, it is sad for the university, but that’s not a place they would just let alone.

Well actually, it’s Julian who recognizes Andreas, not Leon.

@ellette-giselle

I didn’t get tagged for the last section, so I read them both today. I like it a lot. Linus (?) was right, it was time to go back into the cities. Sad for all those at the University. I like how you showed a threat to the church besides the Soldiers—a threat from the inside. And I’m guessing Andreas is also a former fighter that…[Read more]

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th      
The Empire

We’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…

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@the_lost-journal awwww that’s too bad!

hopefully today will be a good day though!