Loopy

@ducktator

That’s awesome! You sound like my brother. XD

How many siblings do you have?

@whalekeeper

Don’t apologize. It’s a cool topic. I don’t typically think about what I sound like this much.

I’m an alto, so I guess lower. You?

@theducktator Ok I’ll try to think of some good questions.

Ayla, what is something you’d say you’re pretty good at?

@whalekeeper That’s cool! It’s kinda weird thinking about how we don’t know what our online friends’ voices sound like. I guess I just sound northwestern since I grew up in the PNW. I also have a slight teaser lisp. 😖 It’s not very noticeable but it still bothers me sometimes.

@rae

I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.

Sorry!

… but I’m also glad I got you thinking 😉

Soo if Chase’s sacrifice for Jenny felt more light and joyful, maybe you could show how he’s grown from the way he acted with Marcel? I’m not sure how exactly, but you could probably keep all…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oo I want some Doctor Who pjs

I’ve been watching the old black and white doctor who from the 60s like a true nerd.

Btw, if you watch the rest, you should probably stop after the eleventh doctor. The twelfth doctor is alright too, but he’s where the show starts to go downhill.

@whalekeeper

than I will

wait, now I’m curious, do you have a southern accent?

Hehe

@theducktator

Your signature is a mood.

Also I can ask your character a few questions if you want

*then

Also I’ve been binge watching doctor who so that’s probably what’s filling up the story portion of my brain

@whalekeeper

Nah, you’re good. Take your time. I haven’t been in a rp writing mood or an artistic mood at all recently. Work and social activities have been draining all my energy.

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
XD I’m glad I’m actually making some sense

@whaley

I can understand why it’s tempting to write a character getting their way though.

Maybe it’s because we relate to our own characters so much? And we like getting what we want.

But that’s also how God judges people.
“Your will be done.”

But idk I haven’t t…[Read more]

@rae
Just to clarify, I think that Chase having that flaw makes him a good and realistic character. I’m not critiquing his flaw, I’m critiquing that it’s being shown as a virtue.

@savannah_grace2009 Yayy :]

Why do I always either not respond to these things, or respond with 3+ giant paragraphs?? There’s pretty much no in between XD

@theducktator 8 or 9

@rae

Ok, first off, I love Jenny and also how you made the unicorn have cloven hooves.

I do have some critiques, though. Sorry if they aren’t helpful.

I don’t think giving your characters what they want is a good idea, unless you’re writing a tragedy. If I gave Ellie the safety that she wanted, she would isolate herse…[Read more]

I found a dumb song that made me giggle called I Am Steve by Hey Steve

Been listening to it on repeat XD

@ellette-giselle

hmm I was taking a break, but I have nothing to do for the next three hours so you can give me a description if you want

I think there’s a bit of over explaining going on with the world building (telling not showing), though it’s not as much as I typically see in early drafts.