Kylie

@ellette-giselle

Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.

I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.

Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It’s Tuesday again! Two new chapters on whichever document you prefer.

@ellette-giselle

Oh, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *

His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.

@ellette-giselle

Augh! Really??

Rick is not a nice guy. 😠 And poor Jim!!

I love the dynamics you have going.

@jonas

Awesome! What do I do with my outline now that it’s written? Do you want it submitted somewhere?

@ellette-giselle

Lol.

I’m very curious to see what the rest of the book is like.

@ellette-Giselle

Hah! so there was a time jump!

Called it 😉

So the memories are coming back for Jonathan…

@ellette-giselle

I don’t know yet. 😂 Probably not great, but I mean at least the others are accepting him.

Okay!

@loopylin

1. Thank you Madam Lin the Loopy-Minded, I shall always welcome your feedback.

2. Very good. Take the time you need.

3. Good. >:)

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

I’ll throw him in with the boys after I sort things out, read up to this point. I’m leaving for the doctor’s and my mind is occupied with needles.

@jonas It worked!

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! Nice to see Jonathan getting to see more of what the gang does. It seems like he’s becoming a full member.

@esther-c

I’ll be praying!! Have fun at volleyball!

And apparently our water heater is messed up too? 😭

Couple things that I’d appreciated y’all’s prayers for…

First, my volleyball tryouts are tomorrow!! A little nervous about that. Just pray that I’d do my best and stay humble.

Also our AC unit is acting up. 😖 And it’s annoying cuz we kinda need AC and we had to fix our furnace this past winter bc it broke down. So prayers for patience and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aw, poor Jim. I liked this section.

@koshka

*Does a little dance* Descriptions are sometimes the bane of my existence because you never know if they’re coming across.

And I promise bullying isn’t the majority of Lucille’s childhood experience. There are actually so many things I want to write about for her, and many things are more cheerful and interesting.

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s my favorite, may I have mercy on her soul. XD

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

Yes, he’s Dali. I call Lucille’s mum by her name as well. It feels more humanizing to call him that in this story rather than calling him ‘her dad’ or Dad.

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it…

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