Kylie

@whalekeeper

Love it!! I love your writing style so much actually! I’m not sure what it is, but something about it makes it easy and engaging to read 🤩

@freed_and_redeemed

Love the aesthetics!!! They look so good!! 🤩

@the_lost-journal

Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I?

@ellette-giselle

*ahem* What main character are you talking about? 🤨

@ellette-giselle

Yess! 😁 Gotcha. I remembered seeing him in it, but not much. (I still gotta finish that. Did you post the whole thing on there, even the ending?)

*putting all the pieces together lol* Yeah, I could tell 😢😢.

@freed_and_redeemed

Awwww, so fun! (Why do your grown characters still ignite the “poor little babies” part of my brain?)

Also…what does Nikolai look like perchance? And have you done a collage for him? (If you haven’t…well now, I don’t know a whole lot about his story, but I think I’ve caught his drift)

@ellette-giselle

OH!!! This is the Leon from the RP!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yayyyy!!!! Julian!!! And more people!! 😆

It looks good! I liked the flashbacks into Joseph’s backstory. The only thing was I caught a sentence or two that didn’t flow well— “It was evening of the next day.” for example. Maybe you could change it to, “it was the next evening?” Idk. I’m sure it’s fine if you leave it.

@the-ducktator

I’ll be praying! 🙏

@the_lost-journal

Ok, sorry, I wasn’t meaning to butt in. I guess I just wanted to defend Ellette (not that she needed it, that’s just kind of how I am), but looking back I didn’t really need to intervene, and it probably just made you feel ganged up on. So I apologize for that.

I hope you know nobody on here hates you, and if you ever want to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Oops, I didn’t see your post.

@the_lost-journal

It’s okay, no one is going to hate you. Ellette wasn’t being serious about really kicking you off KP, and like she said, it’s hard to tell online whether someone is joking or not. I understand that you have a lot going on, but I think you over reacted. If you are hurt by something that someone says, maybe try to clarify what…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lolol. And yeah, I can see what Koshka is saying, but that wasn’t really what I was thinking while I read it. I thought the scene was great.

@the_lost-journal

And I’m sorry if I didn’t sound very nice, I wasn’t trying to come off that way.

@the_lost-journal

I just wanted to say I don’t think you’re being very fair to Ellette. She was not trying to be mean, as she obviously explained, and you kind of blew up when she tried to deescalate the situation.

And I will echo what RAE put very nicely, you have no right to make any claims about anyone’s faith in here. It’s extremely insulti…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good. That’s what I assumed was happening.

The emotional/spiritual aspect will be addressed later.

I’m afraid I was more concerned over the emotional/psychological aspect, but I suppose that’s kinda what you meant.

…

*Cackles*

Oh, and I wasn’t sad. I was almost angry. Slightly mad. Highly miffed. And rather sorry for…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Glares*

You killed him. I’m more than mildly miffed at you.

*Huffs*

*Contemplates writing you into a short story just so I can heap vengeance with my pen*

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As to the last section…

This could just be a difference is my own temperament, upbringing, or understanding, but I’m not sure I agree with how Sabina handled the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ohh, I’m sorry. I didn’t know that was a rule. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Oof, yeah, I get that. It is one of the hardest parts about stories, but also one of the things that really makes you love the characters!

I thought it was pretty realistic that the boys would be quick to fight with each other because they are worn out and worried. Sabina’s idea to help them make up was pretty smart. And she g…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yep! lol. I read pretty fast sometimes, but it wasn’t that long of a section. Plus I saw pretty much as soon as you posted it. 😅