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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I guess I was sort of confused by Joseph’s fears about talking to Ezra, then. He seems to have multiple flashbacks to the soldiers, which is a good way to show how the events have affected him. I was probably confused (I’m assuming now that this scene is replacing the one before where he talks to three young men) about why he was…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Haha. I don’t really care for the things either, so whatever ripeness will inspire someone else to eat them is my favorite.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle Your new blurb sounds so cool! 😍
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay…
@ellette-giselle WAMMM *a snowball creams you* (except I want to see flash fiction under 75 words. *Raises eyebrows*)
@hybridlore AhA! Unsuspecting initiator, meet thy own deeds. *Snowball creams you*
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
*Choking splutter*
How. Dare. Thee. Threaten me. With such a thing.
*Shudder*
FINE.
He stared at me with frozen awe. I stared back. This must be one of those immortal mortals, the first children of blood to walk the earth. The quendë. An Elf. I could hardly breathe.
He was dangerous, this child of blood. Not that I was so…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Wow. I never realized this was such a debate. I thought the answer was pretty simple.
Don’t eat bananas.
Kidding.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I like it a lot! The only things I noticed were that you included the long excerpt from the Bible again… most readers already know the Christmas story so I don’t think you need it in there. Then, also, when Amelia was talking about Mary, some of the tenses seemed wrong. Like, maybe it should be in past tense? Idk. And last thi…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
We watched a little bit of that cartoon recently, lol. Redwall was such a phase for me when I was 10-12; I read almost all the books, and I thinky favorite was Loamhedge or the book with the magical pearls.
Netflix was going to make a movie or television series more recently, but there hasn’t been any news in a couple years.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
We need a “pin post” option.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
That definitely makes sense. When there’s one big group, it’s kind of hard to RP. I’m up for it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle Haha I use my phone a good amount of the time. 🤪 It does take some getting used to.
Lolol, that should be the official video of the forum. 😆
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Guys, I will write a praising, all-adoring ode to anyone who roleplays next! On my honor I will.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@loopylin I remember that guy; you’ve drawn some very cool doodles of him before. 🙂 I didn’t think you were going to integrate him into the Fel&Lois story, but it makes sense.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh yeah, and Chase (and Marcel) are 🤕💀
As always, hehe
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
All I remember is that Dante and the Society are in a kerfuffle, Leo and Rory are long gone escaped across buildings, and the new school officer is checking everything. Also the twins are still washing dishes alone. I should help them.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@liberty I think Ellette meant to tag you for her answer ☝️
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m glad it’s a little intriguing! He wrote it because he always told himself he would, but he has weird physical and mental conditions that make it hard for anyone to take him seriously. He’s trying to feel content.
The letter isn’t even going to make it to the school because of plot conflict.
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Gosh, writing that character with a serious voice feels so rusty.
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hybridlore replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Wow. That was kind of confusing without context, but intriguing character. Why is he writing the letter if he knows he won’t go to that college?
Lolol. Is algebra really that bad? 🤪
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@loopylin @hybridlore @godlyfantasy12 @anyone
Might as well post this because there’s no place for it in the actual story.
This letter is written by an aged-up character who knows he won’t get what he wants. He’s basically too weird and off-putting to be seen as a normal person. He is trying very hard, though.
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