Kylie

@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Thank you all for trying to help with my project! When I asked the question, I was still trying to verbalize what kind of ‘in-between genre’ this is, and I think I know what to aim for now. All the appreciation to you! *Throws confetti in your faces* *Throws glitter into your tea*

@savannah_grace2009

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@esther-c

Don’t get your hopes up girl! Ellette kills approximately every character who ever existed 🤣🤣

@savannah_grace2009

Lol! Ok, awesome, I love it!! 😂

@savannah_grace2009

It doesn’t have to be anything special, tbh. If you just said, “Hey can you get it fully read by the end of February” or something like that, then that would work great. Otherwise, I might just forget or keep putting it off. 😳😂

@ellette-giselle

Wolfy dies, doesn’t he…??? 🫣 Or does he not?? I must knowwwww 😩

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, sounds good!

@koshka

Ah, okay, I get what you’re saying. I’m definitely going to be considering that getting into some major plot points coming up in my book. 😉 Thanks!

@theducktator (excuse my tardy reply🫣🤭)

Aww, that’s a bummer. 🙁 Yeah, the time off can be nice though. 😉 Still praying for y’all!! <33

@ellette-giselle

Thanks so much for taking the time to reply! I really appreciate your point of view on this. I can’t say I agree with everything 100%, but I definitely understand and support your viewpoint. It gave me a lot to think about!

In fact, piggybacking off of your conversation with Whaley, I can totally understand your way of t…[Read more]

@theducktator

NO. MATURE. RELATIONSHIPS. BETWEEN. CHILDREN. I have read about 2 books ever that had elementry/middle school relationships well written. I don’t care if in real life 12 year olds date. I don’t want to read about it.

TELL ME ABOUT IT. It’s insane how often you’ll find those in books and it’s really just ridiculous. 🥱…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 (Almost tagged you @Livia XD)

Lukas

Lukas chewed on his lips for a moment, resting his elbows on the bridge railing. The river gurgled by, providing fresh water for the fountain in the middle of the courtyard. He tried to get the words flowing as fast as this river, but nothing was coming to him. Whenever Lukas was…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

If you gave me a deadline, I’d be totally down for it! Sometimes I’m busy with school and whatnot, but if I have a deadline, I’ll be sure to get to it and give you some feedback!

@keilah-h @theshadow

okay so I will say that I completely agree with the fanfiction thing, likes it’s awful what they put in there

of if I ever go onto the websites I put it at lowest and sometimes the second lowest age rating cause anything above that is awful

but overall I just don’t go on them cause nobody ever finishes them anyways lol…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, I’d love to. I’m not great at suggestions/critique, but I’ll do what I can to help.

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh I love desert settings! Too bad Liv doesn’t feel the same way – and too bad she is so exhausted, for that matter. Is this sister older or younger than her?

@rae

I don’t think it’s too repetitive, except for this bit at the beginning:

Baron knocked and entered his Father’s quarters. He knelt. “You sent for me, Fat…

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@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (she says like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.

@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.

@ellette-giselle

Yay!

@Ellette-Giselle Okay, so it’s not the first chapter yet (that’s not moving on for some reason) but I wrote the Prologue to the WIP I was talking about.

Prologue

A secret is a terrible thing.

Aliena let the door fall closed behind her with a weary thud.

“Your wife is resting, my lord. You have a beautiful son.”

The man sat down on the edge of…

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