Kylie

@savannah_grace2009

Very well done scene!

@the_lost-journal

It’s a weekend camp some people from my church go to every year. It’s in winter, so that’s why it’s called snow camp (though it doesn’t seem like there’s gonna be any snow this year :/). I’m leaving tomorrow.

I’m 15.

I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

I relate to this sentence lol.

Also, your signature is funny.

@rae

Alright! I’ll try to get some feedback to you later today, it might take a bit.

@the_lost-journal

No worries!

@savannah_grace2009

Girl those boards are amazing!!! I love them so much!!! 🤩🤩🤩

@freed_and_redeemed

Ahhhhh that looks like such an awesome fanfic I love it 🤩🤩 So Steve is Robin Hood??

@rae

I read the first part, and this is great! Are you looking more for a sentence-by-sentence critique, or just overall feedback?

Today if I can.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.

*tiptoes in*

*Waves at the adorable girl child*

*Settles into a corner to watch and sip tea*

@ellette-giselle

Awwwwww 😭😭 But I feel like you’re using that as such a good plot device 🙈

@theducktator

In Indiana, you can start driver’s ed at 15.😎 I haven’t actually started yet though and I only just signed up.

Ohhh noiceee 😎 Yeah, I have to wait until I’m 15 1/2. 🤪 Which is both good and bad timing in this case. By the end of May I’ll reach that point, which means I can get my temps. I’ll have lots of time and opportunit…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Oh my goodness I love this so much 🥹

Sometimes I wonder if this forum is actually helping me grow as a writer, and then I look at all the connections and friendships I’ve made and I’m like—yes. <33

@the_lost-journal

Aw man, we’ll miss you! :`(

@keilah-h

Cool screenshots!! I used to play Minecraft, but I kind of got out of it after a while. Me and my siblings would play in phases. Do you play all survival or creative as well?

@loopylin

I know, I’m just not quite sure what to RP atm, so I was just offering to think something up if it would been helpful.

@rae @theshadow

Hehe guys, I forgot about this. My bad.

Hugo

Hugo nodded. Behind him, after inspecting the scale rip in her jacket, Barnes gave a solemn thumbs up.

@koshka

I shall be the undefeated meme champion. Fear me.

I would totally roleplay for this, but Marcel is meant to head towards the river with the others, and I don’t want to singlehandedly move everyone especially because Jonas’ rebel character is leading. I have a feeling everyone has lost track of what needs to happen next, and that’s why the ball isn’t rolling.

I can RP if that will get things moving.

@jonas

No no no continue!