Kylie

@rae

I haven’t read the second part yet, but I’ll critique the first section first.

Keep in mind that this is all my opinion, and you can ignore what you want.

Your first sentence is good. I don’t have any critique for it.

The second sentence has a couple things.

Halfbreed of man and elf, Max lacked the pointed ears and the knifelike sharp…

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@koshka @stephie @ellette-giselle

Ah, okay. XD I asked because I am coldhearted while reading or writing. But I teared up yesterday, and that completely caught me off guard.

Y’all have a good call! I’ll hop on next time if it works out.

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

A pastor I really respect once said, “The problem with pastors today is no one is trying to kill them.”

One of our foreign pastors was killed a week or so ago, and the pastor closest to him got a death threat. There is always this real sense of “oh, somebody in our church may have actually known him,” or at lea…[Read more]

@stephie Congratulations! Also, I can’t remember if we’ve met yet. Hi! I liked your post a lot.

During covid, I really wanted to be a voice of hope and a light for the Lord’s Gospel on the internet and I enjoyed writing and my first thought was “blog.” But it wasn’t until two years later that I actually pursued it. I didn’t have social media…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

*Snort laughs*

*Chokes on my tea*

*Stumbles from room sputtering and laughing*

(I definitely like these characters now. Especially Aubrielle. She sounds like me.)

@whalekeeper

Not typically, or at least not externally. I can tear myself up inside and spend the rest of the day letting off steam.

Now re reading it? I’ll have myself crunched up in a corner, or randomly laughing even though I wrote the whole thing.

Y’all are fine. We’ll just *sniffle* have to survive.

@whalekeeper

*Watches cake disappear* *offers tea*

That sounds like a headache. Do you…do you need more cake?

(*Wonders if my charie names match their colors* *stresses*)

@loopylin

Ugh, yes. So much feel is in a name.

*offers you cake as well*

(Not to distract from the conversation above. But anyone can answer this.) Do you guys actually get super emotional when writing? Normally?

@koshka

*Offers cake and an emotional support fluffy*

*Takes* *Stuffs cake into mouth* *Visibly stressed*

I can like the sound of a name perfectly fine, but the colors are just not it. And then I have to look for a name all over again.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator

The generator Ducky (can I call you that?) shared is one of the less…[Read more]

I probably won’t either because I have a lot to do, sorry guys. :’)

@loopylin

*Is sad*

@whalekeeper

*Stumbles backwards*

Seven could be green, but he’s definitely a conniving mastermind who might work as an acrobat. I don’t really have a color for that.

I’m pretty sure I don’t have synesthesia (or at least, I don’t think I do) but it’s a pretty cool superpower. I just struggle to find a name that has the same personality/feel as…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

My dad side the family is all messed up and scary, (drug dealers and gang leaders and such)

Relatable. My dad’s side is Chicago born and bred. I mean, does anyone else have a great aunt who was a bounty hunter? I don’t think so.

@ellette-giselle

wait, you generated those quote memes? HOW??!?!

You can search for them and you’ll find generators on multiple websites. I must warn you, some of them have language and/or very sexual quotes. Some of them have filters, which I used, but not all of them do.

SEVEN is GREEN!!! Science is green, math is blue, history is brick red, english is gold.

*Throws arms in the air* Also when was the last time anyone mentioned having synesthesia just like me? Because it would be nice to know that other writers have trouble picking character names based on color. You have no idea how much trouble I’ve been through.

And yes, I’m perfectly normal as far as I know. So you’re fine. We’re all made a little weird in some ways, like a special type of glitter.

*Blinks at that wording*

*Isn’t sure what exactly I meant, but decides to leave it*