Kylie

Okay, here’s a few. I was also told that Zlatin Vratisin is a lot like somebody named Balian…except that I was also told not to watch that movie… *is concerned for my character*

@liberty

Ok, awesome, thank youuuu! :))

@liberty

What’s the word limit again??

Seriously contemplating posting some rough character designs. I’ll think about it.

@keilah-h

Lucky Barnes, your author lets you have good things. Sniper’s parents will be dead halfway through the storyline and he’s still a bit messed up from it afterward. And it’s not even my fault.

Lucky in some ways, unlucky in others. XD I decided over the past year or so that I don’t like writing characters with just trauma+healing as thei…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Praying for you!! <33

@stephie

Oh no!! Glad the car’s back, but I’ll continue to pray for y’all!

@ellette-giselle

XD

Leo

He bit back a grin. “Like they always say, it’s not save to jump out of a moving vehicle.”

The lorry door whooshed open. Silvia led the group aboard, waving their bus card under a the scanner. Leo helped Rory up the steps as inconspicuously as possible. The lorry was mostly empty this early in the morning. Their few…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Silvia

Spangled darkness in a thousand colors. Gleaming nebula. White dwarfs.

Silvia blinked away the swirling images. Another time maybe. She’d fly again. She shrugged.

“Just wondering. Not many people around here have.”

She turned her head, catching the distant rattling of the bus coming up the street. A sigh brushed past…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!! I’m so so glad you like it!! 😊  I have been praying over it for a while, that God would help me have the right words and ideas. Thank you so much for your encouragement!

@grcr

Wow. I love the personality of each character (especially the girl hanging off the banister). And the texture on the leaves is gorgeous.

*continues to stare at picture wondering what the characters are like*

@keilah-h

Barnes and Sniper would have a good conversation about their parents being annoying over the phone lollllll

My grandma will call or text at the randomest times, and I always get surprised because I’m in the middle of something. :p

They both should be happy though. At least they have parents who care about them.

Yup, even if the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Listening to Rory’s pain filled breathing made Leo’s own throat ache. He shifted to take more of the kid’s weight.

Then they were on the pavement outside the apartment complex. Another five halting steps deposited them on the bench at the bus stop. Leo let out a gust of air.

“Sorry kid. You probably shouldn’t be out of bed…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You’re fine. You’re still in charge of your character, but I get it. =)

Leo

He stacked their empty plates and carried them to the sink. They’d do the washing up later.

“Quincy, you got your backpack?”

The boy nodded and grinned, swinging his feet under his chair. Bare feet. Silvia her out a half exasperated laugh. “Monkey,…[Read more]

@raxforge

Syph

“Head to class, head to class. Not a bad idea if zi knew where said class was.” He flipped backwards off Rax’s shoulders to land in a crouch in a cushioning puddle. He flicked the water away and dusted off the moisture. “Time of reconing I suppose. You wouldn’t happen to know where the…” He pulled a folded up bit of parchment…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

She walked out of the sound booth and into the school halls, leaving an empty path behind her with frightened students in her wake.

XD

@grcr

Of course!! And you should totally continue that one-shot, it doesn’t need to be anything big! Just something to dip your toe into. And plot ideas come with time. You’re good at drawing personality into the characters, and I bet that will help a lot when you’re not sure where to take the story. Good luck working on it! ❤️

@ellette-giselle

You’re right, you’re right, but that was a better comparison than the Cadwicks. Plus, Sabina and Turin became nicer xD

@ellette-giselle

Lesson learned… I guess I have to add you every time. Unless you were using a different account?

@ellette-giselle

Totally! He has some great qualities but he’s also too emotionally independent for his own good. I love how Jane Austen highlights how important socialization is, and how it’s different from ‘society,’ as in the constructed hierarchy and traditions. Because Darcy really equates them with each other without thinking, and avoids…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yayy!!!

Hmm… they are reminding me of Sabina and Turin a little. More closed-off, not believers, smaller family who probably went through some grief. I’m excited to learn more about them. I feel like the father is already suspicious of them… meaning he might be really opposed when they bring up God… but Liesl will probabl…[Read more]