Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

Finally. I’ve been really looking forward to this chapter. It was good timing too. This was the point in Alan’s life when he was ready. The line “He didn’t need to become that hero, for The Saviour had been that hero for him.” is truly quotable.

Just one small thing.

You start the sentence:

After a little more hesitation. D…

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@linus-smallprint

Cool! Nice to meet you. My dad works in software : )

Yeah, it’s weird how we’re all Americans lol. My sisters writing forum has a lot of Europeans.

I like the sound of the narrow path trilogy! I love crows, my other penname is actually Corvuss. I get that feeling, my book was heavily influenced by the city of ember and I…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Oh.

Well……..

It’s not much of a challenge without other contestants………

@mineralizedwritings  @rae  @linus-smallprint   @keilah-h @loopylin

Any of y’all planning on doing this one?

@whalekeeper

This is great!! I love this!

I’ll tag a few more people in case they’re interested.

@koshka @power @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @elishavet-pidyon

(Look up there at Whaley’s post)

@linus-smallprint

November 1st would be fine. Just don’t be surprised if it sometimes takes me a couple of days to read the sections you post. I might just drop them into a document on my phone so I can read them while taking the LRT to school.

No prob. Take the time you need.

@linus-smallprint

Warning: you may want to prepare for a lore dump when The Cost Draft 2 is done.) I’m just realizing this question is not very easy to answer from the other side.

Oh dear. lol.  I shall be prepared.

wonderful! These are the questions answered (I think?) but it’s nice to have them written out and to also know that my reader is…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

So that’s Darrian’s backstory. I don’t recall anything about this in the story.

Yeah, it was in there, about a paragraph, same time you got Noah’s backstory.

Ahhhh, never thought about pulling in the nobleman “Separation” He was thrown out when he was sixteen. So….. four years ago.

I’m really liking this. This is perfe…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

This isn’t really a meme, but I thought it was such a cool observation! Your sis might like this.

@linus-smallprint

I LOVE the Little House books!

@linus-smallprint

I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.

I was just telling my little sister that she NEEDS to read those books.

@mineralizedwritings

New people: Andrew ( @raxforge ), Kefa ( @the_lost-journal ), Ellette ( @ellette-giselle ), Linus ( @Linus-smallprint ), Shadow ( @theshadow ), Liberty ( @liberty ), Ducktator ( @theducktator )

I’ll let them introduce themselves if they so wish.

@linus-smallprint

OH. MY. GOODNESS.

This was like a treasure!!!! Oh this is so, so good! I can already see some scenes where I can add all of this stuff in/strengthen it.

Ardentan’s betraying the church……………. Someone’s quick on the draw………… tho I may have intended to save that one……….

I do get your point about being…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh boy! Starting it right now!!!! Can’t wait!!!

I haven’t proofread this too carefully, so there may be some questionable grammar mistakes

*sigh* There always is my Canadian friend.

LOLOLOLOL!

(Actually, I enjoy your non American grammar. lol)

@linus-smallprint

The Wilderking Trilogy by Jonathan Rogers is an allegorical story on the life of David, with some twists thrown in. (And a completely different world.) It’s got some great humor in it! I would recommend.

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint

(if you were reading something like Fifty Shades of Grey or Twilight we would be having a totally different conversation)

OOOF NOOOOO NOT TWILIGHT

There was one good thing about it, and that was the fact that even my trashiest works look like masterpieces next to it. And they’re at least pretty much…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

The farmer Charles Wherl, before he used magic, is somewhat inspired by Charles Ingles. THey are both fathers who live in a house in the woods with their families, enjoy telling stories to their children, and play some sort of instrument (Though the fact that they are both named Charles is pure coincidence). The reason why I was…

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@linus-smallprint

Wait! Really!

Oh wow! That’s amazing!!

@linus-smallprint

Oh yippy!!!!

I was sitting here thinking “He forgot all about it. He’s gonna ask for the end of November.” Lol.

I’m really looking forward to your answers!

@linus-smallprint

Well, it’s the end of October and I have been waiting with bated breath! (very patiently, I might add)

Do you have any answers to the questions, or do you want to wait until the VERY end of October?

@linus-smallprint

I think murderer could work as long as he said Like murderer, or almost was a murderer. If you want him to say something that he is, he could think of himself as a monster or wild beast. Or, since he is trying to be the hero, an interesting flip would be to have him decide, “I’m not the hero, I’m the villain.” That would flow…[Read more]