Linus Smallprint

@power

Thanks! The story is actually my sister’s story, but I wrote it. It was a neat project to do with her! Thanks for judging…even though there wasn’t much to judge.

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I know. It’s busy this time of year.

@linus-smallprint

No, I’m concentrating on finishing my main WIP right now. Maybe in the new year I will p…

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@linus-smallprint

Come ON.

*ushers my little sister in to do her cute face* please don’t kill Charles?

Being a writer, I know you’ll probably kill him.

@keilah-h

I’m curious about the Australia story.

And yes. Italian food is AMAZING. My family has recipes that have been passed down for generations.

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION

It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…

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@linus-smallprint @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @calyhuge @koshka

Are any of you people planning on entering the contest????

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Are any of you people planning on entering the contest????

@linus-smallprint I think letting it be up to the reader is good choice. Me, I can’t see why they’d go back to being human. The way you have your story set up, the different species are a symbol of different nationalities. And I don’t think our cultures will be completely taken away in the new heaven and earth. We’ll be part of one…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, ofc, use them for whatever you want.

@linus-smallprint

I think he should ask the king for time to think and then try to free Charles. He definitely should NOT go back to magic, even for Charles.😭

@linus-smallprint That’s what I thought.

What about nonwizards that are still half animal?

also I like how the way you did the switch was inspired by the book of Acts!

@linus-smallprint

Nooooooo! I knew Charles was doomed.😭 I don’t think Alan will go back to magic again. I find it more likely he attempts to free Charles again, but Charles still dies somehow.

@linus-smallprint

Reminds me of someone else. (Sabina)

huh. I hadn’t thought of that.

My first thought was a story about her brother, David.

ah, whoops. I can fix that.

This felt too quick. He’s gone from cold and only speaking when necessary to suddenly spilling out his entire backstory. Could you show him considering doing this before h…

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@linus-smallprint I love how it went to first person! I don’t know why. Maybe it’s cause I write in first person in my current WIP and haven’t seen anyone else use it in a while.

Wow! okay! Cyrus has given Alan a cruel ultimatum. I have no idea what Alan will do in this situation. I mean, Charles has already pointed out he’s not afraid to die,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I saw that coming and really didn’t want to.

oh why are you so mean! Why are you such a terrible person. *sobbing* (like I have room to talk)

Oh man. He shouldn’t do it, of course! But man, this one is gonna hurt.

One thought.

I know if you choose to punish me instead, I will deserve whatever it is you do.”
He j…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I saw that coming and really didn’t want to.

oh why are you so mean! Why are you such a terrible person. *sobbing* (like I have room to talk)

Oh man. He shouldn’t do it, of course! But man, this one is gonna hurt.

One thought.

I know if you choose to punish me instead, I will deserve whatever it is you do.”

He j…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thank you.

very relieved me goes and starts reading.

@linus-smallprint

HAY!

Was that supposed to be a prank…………

This should be chapter 22…… (Chapter 30th being The Prison and Chapter 31st The Regretful,) but there is no Chapter 22nd!

Where did it go?

@linus-smallprint

If you’re asking what do I think he should do right now (before I read the chapter), then i don’t know. There’s not much he can do, besides not cooperate.

Oh yay! We’ve hit the chapter that has the book name, This’ll be good.

@raxforge   @linus-smallprint    @keilah-h

I have a feeling y’all would get a kick out of this.